Task:Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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解析

參加本周考試的烤鴨心里肯定非常高興，不僅因為本周寫作題目是2014年5月17日的翻版，而且因為這個話題實在太熟悉不過了。關于看電視是否幫助到孩子們學習，我們一定有很多話可說：電視里有各種各樣的學習節目，包括英語、旅游、烹飪、談話等，孩子們可以學到很多有益的知識，而且電視節目往往制作精良，講解很生動，很有利于孩子們保持學習興趣;但是電視看得太多，也會影響孩子們，這個我們也有很多話可說，比如，傷害眼睛，電視里也有一些不利于孩子們的內容，花太多時間看電視會影響孩子閱讀的時間，影響孩子與其他孩子交往的時間，等等。因此，雖然可以鼓勵孩子們看一些電視，但孩子們應該接受家長和老師的監督，合理安排看電視的時間。因此，對于本題，烤鴨能否取得理想的分數，主要取決于表達能力，也就是表達得十分準確而有個性化。正是由于大家思維都接近，如何來表達這個思維就成了考官評分的最主要依據了。

參考范文及注釋

Children sitting in front of TV and enjoying their favorite programmes is certainly an attractive scenario, yet TV is an even more attractive tool for the education of children. Travel channels take children to many different places around the globe, thus opening their eyes to the vast outside world. History programmes give children a sense of the past by telling them about historical events and figures. And, if children watch such programms as “animal world”, they may cultivate an awareness of the environment in which we human beings find ourselves and then they may understand the importance of maintaining good relationships with animals. Furthermore, TV often presents knowledge in far more vivid ways than books and teachers, which makes learning from TV a very enjoyable and efficient process.

孩子坐在電視機前欣賞自己最喜歡的節目，這個場景當然是非常誘人的，但作為教育孩子的工具，電視更誘人。旅游頻道將孩子帶到世界不同的地方，從而讓他們了解到廣袤的外面世界;歷史節目講述歷史事件和人物，給孩子們一種過去的感覺;如果孩子們觀看“動物世界”這類節目，就可以培養一種人類生存其中的環境意識，從而可以理解與動物保持良好關系的重要性。此外，電視呈現知識的方式遠比書本和老師更加生動，這讓通過電視來學習的過程變得非常快樂和高效。

(1) 本段開門見山，直接論述孩子通過電視學習的好處。注意，老雅通過簡單地描寫一個場景來引出話題：孩子坐在電視機前觀看自己喜歡的節目是一個誘人的場景。這種開頭方式有一種畫面感，而不是枯燥無味提出話題，比如：When it comes to children’s education, TV is often considered to be a very attractive way. 請有志于高分的烤鴨多揣摩這種個性開頭法，并在平時練習中加以應用。

(2) Scenario 場景

(3) Vast 廣闊的

(4) Cultivate an awareness of... 培養一種......的意識

(5) Maintain 維護;維持

(6) Present 呈現

(7) Efficient 高效的

However, it does not follow that children should be encouraged to watch TV as much as they want at home and in school. In the first place, watching too much TV is harmful to the eyes of the children. As a matter of fact, many children become short-sighted at an early age simply because they spend too much time staring at the TV screen. Then, watching too much TV means the children have to sacrifice their time for reading and other creative activities. As many experts suggest, though children can learn a great deal from watching TV, yet their imagination and language skills can be better developed by reading. Even worse, if children sit in front of TV for too long, they will have little time to mix up with other children, which may put their interpersonal skills at stake.

然而，這并不意味著家里和學校應該鼓勵孩子隨心所欲地觀看電視。首先，觀看太多電視有害于孩子的眼睛。事實上，很多孩子從小就變得近視，原因就是他們花太多時間盯著電視屏幕了。其次，觀看太多電視意味著孩子們必須犧牲用來閱讀和其他有創造性活動的時間。如很多專家認為的那樣，雖然孩子們可以通過電視學到很多，但是通過閱讀，他們的想象力和語言技能才能得到更好的發展。更糟糕的是，如果孩子們在電視前坐得太久，他們就沒有多少時間和其他孩子一起，這會危及到他們的人際交往技巧。

(1)本段分析看電視的壞處，主要從三個方面分析：身體層面(有害視力)、心理層面(想象力和語言技能)、社會層面(人際交往)來入手。每一個方面都用兩句話來論述。

(2)It does not follow that... 這不意味著......

(3)As a matter of fact 事實上

(4)Sacrifice 犧牲

(5)Creative 有創造性的

(6)Mix up with... 與......混在一起

(7)Interpersonal 人際的

(8)At stake (= in danger) 處于危險中

To conclude, when we consider the positive role TV plays in children’s development, we need to take into account its possible consequences. We should allow children to watch TV because it is a good way for them to learn about the world, but we should also set a limit on the TV-watching time so that our children can find time for other activities that may help improve their personalities, imagination and interpersonal skills.

總之，當我們考慮電視在孩子的發展過程積極的作用時，我們需要考慮其可能的后果。我們應該讓孩子看電視，因為這是他們了解世界的一個好辦法，但是我們也應該為電視觀看時間設定一個限度，這樣孩子們才能找到時間去從事其他可以提高他們個性、想象力和人際交往技能的活動。

(1)本段是結論段，對前面的討論進行總結。

(2)Positive 積極的

(3)Take into account 把......考慮進去

(4)Consequence 后果

(5)Set a limit on... 為......設定界限

(6)Personality 個性

附：近年來雅思作文與“電視”相關的題目

“電視”(television)是雅思考試的常客，2010年以來關于“電視”的話題出現過16次，僅2016年就出現4次，而且命題方向靈活，既有關于觀看電視的好處和壞處，也有電視對于我們生活的影響，等等。現附上考試真題，供各位烤鴨參考。

2010年(共4題)

Children are now more interested in watching TV than creative activities. What cause the phenomenon and how to solve it? (2010/3/27)

現在孩子們更喜歡看電視，而不是從事創造性的活動。什么造成了這種現象，如何解決?

It has been suggested that everyone in the world should have their own car, TV and fridge. Do you think disadvantages of such development of society outweigh the advantages? (2010/4/24)

有人說，世界上所有人都應該擁有屬于自己的汽車、電視和冰箱。你認為社會的這個發展利大于弊嗎?

Someone believes that parents should read or tell stories to their children. However, some others find it unnecessary because children can read books and watch TV by themselves. Discuss both views and present your own opinion.(2010/11/4)

有些人認為，父母應該給孩子讀故事或者講故事，然而，其他人發現這根本沒有必要，因為孩子們可以自己讀書或者看電視。請討論雙方觀點，并提出你自己的看法。

A recent study shows that children aged between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should be taken to solve this problem?(2010/9/25)

2012-2013年(共5題)

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2012/6/9)

有些人認為，新聞與人們的生活沒有關系，因此閱讀報紙新聞或者觀看電視新聞節目都是浪費時間。你在何種程度上同意還是不同意這種觀點?

In some countries, TV programs are transmitted throughout the day and night. Some people think that 24-hour TV transmission is a positive development, while others it is negative. (2012/8/4)

在有些國家，電視節目全天候發送。有人認為這種24小時電視不間斷發送是件積極的事情，而其他人認為則認為不好。

It is believed by many that those people who read for pleasure are better in imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2013/1/5)

許多人認為，休閑時閱讀的人比喜歡看電視的人在想象力和語言能力方便更強。在何種程度上你同意還是不同意這種觀點?

Some people say watching television is bad for children in all ways, while others say it is good for children to get knowledge. Do you agree or disagree?(2013/2/2)

有人說，看電視對孩子來說有百害而無一利，而其他人則說電視有利于孩子獲得知識。你同意哪個觀點?

2014-2015年(共3題)

Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2014/5/17)

孩子們可以通過看電視有效地學習，因此家里和學校都應該鼓勵孩子定期看電視。在何種程度上你同意還是不同意這個觀點?

Students in school or university can learn more from classes and teachers than from other sources (e.g. the Internet or TV). To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015/9/12)

中學或大學的學生通過課堂和老師學習的東西要多于其他渠道(如網絡或電視)。在何種程度上你同意還是不同意這個觀點?

Some people think reading stories in book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2015/12/12)

有些人認為，閱讀書本故事比看電視或玩電腦游戲更有利于孩子。在何種程度上你同意還是不同意這個觀點?

2016年(共4題)

Differences between countries are becoming less evident recently. People can see the same films, brands, fashion, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do disadvantages outweigh advantages? (2016/1/9)

現在，國家之間的差異越來越不明顯了，人們能看到同樣的電影、品牌、時尚、廣告和電視頻道。這種現象在何種程度上是利大于弊?

Some people think it's necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries.However, other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.(2016/8/4)

有人認為，了解其他國家，有必要出國去旅游。然而，其他人則認為沒有必要出國旅游，因為所有信息都可在電視或網絡上看到。討論雙方觀點，并給出你自己的觀點。

Some people think having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices, while others think it is not good because programs' quality is low.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2016/9/3)

有些人認為，有更多電視頻道是件好事，因為人們有更多選擇，而其他人則認為這不是好事，因為更多頻道意味著電視節目質量低下。討論雙方觀點，并給出你自己的看法。

In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (2016/10/22)

在有些國家，犯罪審判現場被電視直播，這樣所有人都能看到。這樣做利大于弊嗎?

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