2017年7月15日雅思寫作考試真題范文
Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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行文思路
首段改寫題目，并直接提出自己觀點，覺得讓孩子自主閱讀更好。第一個主體段先討論父母閱讀的好處：可以讓孩子更加容易的獲取知識，因為父母可以在閱讀的過程中為孩子解惑。段落中運用了解釋說明和舉例等論證方法。
第二個主體段轉折，提出，閱讀的意義絕不僅僅是為了獲取信息，通過孩子自主閱讀，可以培養孩子的學習自主性，并且孩子可以廣泛地閱讀。注意第二個主體段內的兩個點是并列關系。
結尾段用讓步狀語從句總結觀點，盡管父母讀會更容易獲取知識，但是自主閱讀的意義更加深遠。
參考范文：
In current society, people are cynical about whether parents should read stories to their children or let children gain information through books, TV and movies by themselves. In my opinion, it is a better method for children to obtain information through their own efforts.
On the one hand, the outcomes of reading by parents can be very rewarding, through which children can acquire knowledge more easily and smoothly. That is to say, in the process of reading, parents may provide children with detailed explanations. For instance, when children are confused about the differences of pandas and bears, parents can explain the differences from habits and characteristics, and through this, children can gain a better understanding of knowledge and maybe foster the love of reading.
However, the purpose of reading books or watching TV is never just confined to acquire knowledge or information. Apart from this, children can develop their autonomy in information obtaining and since this process is self-paced they can develop their time management skills and personality such as persistence, all of which is beneficial for their future study and career. What is more, a large number of parents are so busy that the time spent on reading for their children is limited and if children read books or watch TV, movies by themselves, they are more likely to read extensively and they will be more prepared when they encounter any problem in other fields in the future.
To sum up, while it is much simple for children to acquire knowledge if their parents read for them, I believe students can benefit more in the long term if they develop the skill of reading independently.
范文原創自小站范硯秋老師 276 words
重點詞匯
be cynical about…對…感到憤世嫉俗
rewarding有益的
gain a better understanding of更好地理解…
foster the love of培養對…的喜愛
be never just confined to…絕不僅僅局限于…
develop their autonomy in…培養他們在…方面的自主性
self-paced(學生)按照自己進度的
read extensively廣泛地閱讀
reading independently獨立閱讀
In my opinion…我認為
On the one hand一方面，…
That is to say…也就是說…
For instance,…比如說，…
What is more,…另外，…
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