2017年11月11日雅思寫作小作文原創(chuàng)高分范文解析
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雅思小作文范文解析：本題屬于柱圖組合類別。考生在處理信息時(shí)務(wù)必做到區(qū)分重點(diǎn)和次重點(diǎn)以免數(shù)值論述過多，造成模糊數(shù)據(jù)特征。此外，在段落劃分方面，組合圖形基本可以遵循 “一圖一段” 的方法。(此處不考慮特殊情況)
原創(chuàng)雅思小作文高分范文：
The bar charts compare the average amount of protein and calorie intake by people from four regions of the world.
It is noticeable that people in North America take most protein into their bodies, with 62 grams of animal protein and 18 grams of other protein and the overall quantity is almost double that of protein intake by Latin American (45grams). Meanwhile, their animal protein intake is approximately at half of that by North American. However, the intake of protein in India and East Africa is much less, at around 30 grams among which they share the same amount of other protein intake (15grams).
Regarding to average intake of calories, the figure for North America is over the ideal calorie intake, standing at 3500 kilocalories and for Latin America is 2800 kilocalories, close to ideal intake ( 3000 kilocalories). By contrast, there are only 2000 kilocalories intake for people in India.
Overall, it can be seen that average intake of protein and calories of North American both exceed the ideal standards whereas that for Indian are the lowest among those areas.(182 words)
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regarding to… 至于…
stand at… 到達(dá)…
close to… 接近…
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