帶來2017年12月9日雅思寫作真題大作文范文，社會類話題，題目是：A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?原創來自小站范鈺紅老師。

1.范文解析

范文解析 解析：本文屬于社會生活類話題。其文體為說明文。考生在布局篇章結構時，可以對應問題確定主體段的內容。對于本題中城鄉差異導致的問題和解決方面考生應該不難想出，詞匯和短語方面也主要是關于社會服務以及經濟發展?？傮w來說，本題難度系數并不是很大。

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2.原創范文

In the course of national economic progress, the imbalanced development between urban and rural areas has become a big concern for the authority, as it may give rise to a series of more pressing issues, which I would illustrate as follows.

Among those problems, the explosion of population in megacities is an inevitable one. Apparently, the sound public facilities and adequate educational resources attract a large quantity of people to flood into cities. Statistics show that in 2006, the total of residents in Shanghai ( a metropolis in China) was about 24. 20 million, of which approximately 40% of them were non-natives. Obviously, under such circumstance soaring house price and the heavy burden on traffic system are deemed as the consequent troubles. Most working class can hardly afford a private home or an apartment and traffic congestion is so common in every rush hour, demonstrating the urban infrastructure virtually cannot satisfy the demands of growing population.

What’s worse, this urban-rural gap may contribute to a vicious circle. As more locals swarm into large cities, the shrinkage of labour force in the countryside is worse, being an obstacle on the way to economic success. In consequence, the slow-paced rural economy renders the gap widens further.

In an attempt to diminish the gap, effective measures are supposed to be adopted and the first step is that the state should allocate more budget for the public service such as medical insurance, education as well as public transport in rural areas. Furthermore, the leading industries in countryside should be supported by government. For example, specific talents and high technology can be introduced to stimulate the agricultural development; historical experts can be hired to restore local cultural heritage so as to boost tourism industry. Only when public facilities were upgraded and local economy thrives, can people work and live in their hometown and the disparity between the city and countryside can be narrowed.(319 words)

3.文章結構

paragraph 1 :結合時代背景引入話題。

paragraph 2: 論述城鄉差距導致的問題1(1.大量人口涌入城市以及其引發的問題)。

paragraph 3: 論述城鄉差距導致的問題2(2.惡性循環)。

paragraph 4: 提出解決方法并總結。

4.高分結構

In the course of, … has become a big concern for… 在..的過程中，…已經成為了一個很大的問題

Only when, can… 只有當…的時候，…可以

5.高分話題表達

the imbalanced development between… and… …和…之間的發展不平衡

give rise to… 引起

the explosion of population 人口的爆炸

megacity 大城市

inevitable 不可避免的

sound public facilities 完善的公共設施

adequate educational resources 充足的教育資源

flood into cities 涌入城市

non-natives 外鄉人

soaring house price 激增的房價

heavy burden on traffic system 交通及通的重擔

consequent 隨之發生的

working class 工薪階層

traffic congestion 交通阻塞

rush hour 高峰期

urban infrastructure 城市基礎設施

urban-rural gap 城鄉差距

a vicious circle 一個惡性循環

swarm into 涌入

the shrinkage of …的收縮

an obstacle on the way to economic success 經濟發展道路上的障礙

slow-paced rural economy 緩慢發展的鄉村經濟

diminish the gap 縮小差距

specific talents 專門的人才

stimulate the agricultural development 刺激農業發展

cultural heritage 文化遺產

boost tourism industry 促進旅游業

the disparity between… and … …和…的差距

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