2017年12月9日雅思寫作真題范文之小作文
為大家帶來2017年12月9日雅思寫作真題范文之小作文：The charts below show the average age men and women retired in seven countries in 2004 and 2008.圖標數據有關男女退休年齡的數據。
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1.范文解析：本題為多圖復雜性柱狀圖。考試在處理數值時務必做好取舍。其中重點描述最高和最低數值以及差值比較有特色的數值，此外的數值可以省略不談。另，當考慮主體段分段時，基本按照圖形呈現方式為依據(男女各一段即可)。最后，在描述年紀時切忌使用“高、低”或“大、小”這類形容詞。
2.雅思小作文范文
The bar charts compare the average retirement age of females and males in seven nations in the years 2004 and 2008.
From the chart, it can be seen that except for Italian women, females in other six countries retired at older age in 2008 compared with those who retired in 2004. Besides, the retirement age of French women was youngest at 58.7 years old in 2004 and 58.8 years old in 2008. By contrast, Swedish females did not retire until they were at the age of 63 year-old in 2004 and 63.5 years old in 2008, which was the oldest retiring age among those mentioned countries.
Regarding to men, apart from those in Italy where they retried at the age of 63 in both years, male retirement age was raised in other nations in 2008 and the biggest increase was seen in the figure for males in Germany. It is interesting to note that the age of retired men in French was also the youngest but in Sweden the oldest.
Overall, it is noticeable that males worked for a longer period than females both in 2004 and 2008.(188 words)
3.高分表達
From the chart, it can be seen that… 從圖表中我們可以看出…
compared with 相比較
By contrast 相比之下
Regarding to 關于
the biggest increase was seen in the figure for… …的數據得到了最大的增長
It is interesting to note that… 有趣的是，我們注意到…
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