2018年10月20日雅思寫作小作文范文解析：
為大家送上小站出品的2018年10月20日雅思小作文范文及真題解析，本期小作文的話題為一組病房服務(wù)調(diào)研，數(shù)據(jù)如下，
小作文題目：The bar chart shows the results of a survey about different wards of a hospital and the percentages of patients who think “very good” of the experience of the hospital.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
小作文范文解析：
該題目屬于靜態(tài)柱圖。3W(when, where, what)中的時間沒有給出，只說了是a survey， 默認使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。地點是一家醫(yī)院里面的三種病房。具體項目是四種方面的滿意度比例。該題目既要對比三種病房的滿意度差異，又要對比四個評估方面的差異。仔細觀察圖例可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，Polly Ward在各方面都很突出，其次是Maple Ward, 而表現(xiàn)最差的是Oak Ward。建議可以嘗試按照三種病房為主線，每一種病房單獨描述。
雅思小作文范文
The bar chart compares satisfaction rates of patients from three wards of a hospital in terms of four respects，as illustrated from a survey.
這個柱狀圖對比滿足率從三個病房的病人的醫(yī)院四個方面,從調(diào)查中舉例說明。
Generally, Polly ward performs the most extraordinary as the maximum proportion of patients think highly of its service of staff, time waste, quality of treatment and after care. It stands in marked contrast with Oak Ward which receives the least praise.
一般情況下，Polly ward的表現(xiàn)是最不尋常的，因為最大比例的患者認為它的服務(wù)人員，時間浪費，治療質(zhì)量和護理。它與橡樹園形成了鮮明的對比，橡樹園受到的贊揚最少。
Specifically, the vast majority of patients (90%) are very satisfied with quality of treatment provided by Polly Ward, exceeding its service of staff and quality of after care by 5% while three quarters of people favor its time allocation.
具體來說，絕大多數(shù)患者(90%)對Polly Ward提供的治療質(zhì)量非常滿意，超過了其服務(wù)人員和售后服務(wù)質(zhì)量5%，四分之三的人支持其時間分配。
Turning to Maple Ward, three quarters of people like its quality of treatment and after care while the service of staff is marginally less preferable. Also noticeable is that the least number of people (64%) are content with its time waste.
談到楓葉病房，四分之三的人喜歡它的治療和護理質(zhì)量，而員工的服務(wù)則略顯遜色。值得注意的是，滿足于浪費時間的人最少(64%)。
By contrast, the situation becomes barely satisfactory in Oak Ward, with merely more than half of people enjoying its three aspects of service except quality of treatment which gained satisfaction from 70% of patients.
相比之下，Oak病房的情況并不令人滿意，只有一半以上的人喜歡它的三個方面的服務(wù)，只有70%的病人對治療質(zhì)量滿意。
Overall, among all the three wards, quality of treatment and after care are the most favorable aspects of service while the other two aspects are less popular.
總體而言，在所有三個病房中，治療質(zhì)量和護理后護理是服務(wù)中最有利的方面，而其他兩個方面則不那么受歡迎。
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