小站雅思頻道為大家?guī)?018年3月24日?qǐng)龅?a href=http://www.hengchuai.cn/writing/englishtest/ielts/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雅思寫作原創(chuàng)范文，范文來自邢睿贏老師。本場(chǎng)雅思寫作范文解析：本題討論報(bào)紙和其他媒體在播報(bào)新聞上誰更好。題目類型是議論文的兩種觀點(diǎn)類題目，題目問問法是Discuss both views and give your opinion類型，可以采用4段式作文結(jié)構(gòu)。請(qǐng)看范文結(jié)構(gòu)及范文詳情：

雅思寫作真題文章結(jié)構(gòu)

P1：引入話題+表明觀點(diǎn)(否定觀點(diǎn)一;肯定觀點(diǎn)二)

P2：指出報(bào)紙的弊端：報(bào)紙已不符合現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的需求。

P3：指出其他媒體的優(yōu)勢(shì)：其他媒體傳遞新聞比較方便快捷。

P4：總結(jié)：重申觀點(diǎn)。

雅思寫作高分話題表達(dá)

Bombard with 連環(huán)轟炸

Outdated 不符合時(shí)態(tài)潮流的

Time-efficient 具有時(shí)間效率的

Money-consuming 花錢的

Unfold (消息)傳開

Simultaneously 同時(shí)的

Put great emphasis on 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Internet access 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)接入

Fail to 未能做某事

Gain popularity 受歡迎的

雅思寫作高分結(jié)構(gòu)

Less time-efficient and cost-efficient, 形容詞做原因狀語

This is mainly because 這主要是因?yàn)?/p>

a contribution that every employer seems to be reluctant to make. 概括性同位語

So powerful are other media So...that倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

What readers just need to do 主語從句

not just gain more popularity but undermine the position of the old-fashioned newspaper . Not just…but also 的平行

雅思寫作大作文范文

Although bombarded with different kinds of news, audiences these days rarely read news by newspapers but by other media. However, my view is that in delivering news, newspaper is outdated and other media, as an effective and efficient tool for people to read news, is a far better alternative.

Less time-efficient and cost-efficient, newspaper is no longer preferable in today’s world. For one thing, the newspaper fails to change its role in spreading news in a world where every individual puts great emphasis on the effectiveness over time. This is mainly because producing newspaper is also man-made process of editing, printing news onto paper and finally distributing it to readers, which is quite time-consuming. When the news reaches the readers, it may be out of date. For another, the distribution of newspapers is also labor-intensive and thus money-consuming. For example, this needs workers to print, transport and sell the newspapers to readers, so that employees have to pay for more salaries, a contribution that every employer seems to be reluctant to make.

So powerful are other media, especially social media ,that they can spread news a great deal faster and farther than any other news outlets including the newspaper do. Without having to buy a newspaper, what readers just need to do is updating their Twitter or Facebook or surfing online whenever they want to read news or wherever they are as long as the Internet access is available. For example, as soon as some big events like the Boston Marathon bombing happen, the news unfolds simultaneously through social media as well as live TV broadcast, and travels to every corner of the world instantly. This is what the newspaper can hardly compete.

In conclusion, being convenient and fast in news spreading, other media not just gain more popularity among different readers but undermine the position of the old-fashioned newspaper.(306words)

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