考研英語小作文批改：感謝信0-4分例文3
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考研英語復習資料：考研英語作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
0-4分
第三篇
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.
Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give（改為gave） me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in （in 后面要加doing sth.）a variety of activities including(刪除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,（加and） playing simple English games, and so on（刪除）, I fear that I would have been searching(改為going) a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it(刪除).
Every one agrees that it was you who give（改為gave） me many opportunities to speak English loudly, （改為.because 首字母大寫）beacuse(拼寫錯誤，改為because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改為in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英語) in English, and now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改為great)interst（拼寫錯誤interest） in English both listening and writing.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3分
同學你好，標點符號與后面的單詞之間空一格。嘆號后面的第一個單詞首字母也要大寫。單詞拼寫的錯誤盡量避免。建議你好好學習一下有關虛擬語氣的知識點，多讀一些英語文章，可有效杜絕中式英語。
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0-4分
第三篇
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.
Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give（改為gave） me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in （in 后面要加doing sth.）a variety of activities including(刪除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,（加and） playing simple English games, and so on（刪除）, I fear that I would have been searching(改為going) a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it(刪除).
Every one agrees that it was you who give（改為gave） me many opportunities to speak English loudly, （改為.because 首字母大寫）beacuse(拼寫錯誤，改為because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改為in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英語) in English, and now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改為great)interst（拼寫錯誤interest） in English both listening and writing.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3分
同學你好，標點符號與后面的單詞之間空一格。嘆號后面的第一個單詞首字母也要大寫。單詞拼寫的錯誤盡量避免。建議你好好學習一下有關虛擬語氣的知識點，多讀一些英語文章，可有效杜絕中式英語。
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