考研英語小作文批改：感謝信5-7分例文2
閱讀 : 次
考研英語復習資料：考研英語作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.
Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel （改為in the journey）abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改為on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改為couldn’t) find the way coming back.
Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide（改為guided） me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，作文寫的還不錯，但應保持時態的前后一致以及固定搭配。
本文標題：考研英語小作文批改：感謝信5-7分例文2 - 考研英語作文_考研英語作文模板_考研英語作文范文考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.
Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel （改為in the journey）abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改為on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改為couldn’t) find the way coming back.
Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide（改為guided） me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，作文寫的還不錯，但應保持時態的前后一致以及固定搭配。
本文地址：http://www.hengchuai.cn/writing/englishtest/kaoyan/45577.html
