考研英語小作文批改：感謝信5-7分例文5
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考研英語復習資料：考研英語作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第五篇
Dear Ms. Wang,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Ms. Wang,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改為kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
Every one agrees that it was you who are(改為were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，寫作文時要再認真一點，寫完后再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態要保持一致。
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5-7分
第五篇
Dear Ms. Wang,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Ms. Wang,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改為kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
Every one agrees that it was you who are(改為were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，寫作文時要再認真一點，寫完后再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態要保持一致。
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