考研英語小作文批改：求職信0-4分例文2
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英語復習資料：作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
0-4分
第二篇
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.
Please give me a（改為an） interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear sir or madam,
I am writting（拼寫錯誤，改為writing） this letter（刪除） to apply for a position of（改為as） secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication（改為communicate）with foreigner fluently. Also I was past（改為passed） the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past(改為passed) national computer test brand three before I enter(加ed) university. I can skilled(改為skillfully) operate the majority of office software(加s).
Please give me a（改為an） interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2分
同學你好，你的英語基礎比較薄弱，還是建議你多背模版，另外，你的應聘職位最好能與你的專業和工作經歷相關。
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0-4分
第二篇
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.
Please give me a（改為an） interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear sir or madam,
I am writting（拼寫錯誤，改為writing） this letter（刪除） to apply for a position of（改為as） secretary.
I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication（改為communicate）with foreigner fluently. Also I was past（改為passed） the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past(改為passed) national computer test brand three before I enter(加ed) university. I can skilled(改為skillfully) operate the majority of office software(加s).
Please give me a（改為an） interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2分
同學你好，你的英語基礎比較薄弱，還是建議你多背模版，另外，你的應聘職位最好能與你的專業和工作經歷相關。
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