考研英語小作文批改：道歉信0-4分例文1
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英語復習資料：作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
0-4分
第一篇
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that｛I have been invested（用詞不當）to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold（改為held） by the world economic organization as academic critics｝ during（改為from） October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4分
同學你好，表達能力需要提高，這篇作文中有詞匯使用以及語法結構的錯誤，導致我不能理解你要表達的意思。建議你多背一些滿分作文，積累一些好的句型、詞組。
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0-4分
第一篇
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of China's industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that｛I have been invested（用詞不當）to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold（改為held） by the world economic organization as academic critics｝ during（改為from） October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4分
同學你好，表達能力需要提高，這篇作文中有詞匯使用以及語法結構的錯誤，導致我不能理解你要表達的意思。建議你多背一些滿分作文，積累一些好的句型、詞組。
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