考研英語小作文批改：道歉信5-7分例文1
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英語復習資料：作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第一篇
Dear Ada,
I am truly sorry that I fail to retune the book to you on time.
The reason is that I have lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept
my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Ada,
I am truly sorry that I fail(加ed) to retune(拼寫錯誤，改為return) the book to you on time.
The reason is(改為was) that I have(刪除) lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely（加逗號）
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，注意小作文的寫作格式。你所道歉的事發生在過去，因此全篇要用過去時。
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5-7分
第一篇
Dear Ada,
I am truly sorry that I fail to retune the book to you on time.
The reason is that I have lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept
my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Ada,
I am truly sorry that I fail(加ed) to retune(拼寫錯誤，改為return) the book to you on time.
The reason is(改為was) that I have(刪除) lost the book because of my carelessness. Of course, I must solve this problem as soon as possible.
The following are some of my suggestions. I can either buy the new book or compensate at a reasonable price, and let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely（加逗號）
Li Ming
6分
同學你好，注意小作文的寫作格式。你所道歉的事發生在過去，因此全篇要用過去時。
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