名師指導(dǎo):2014考研英語(yǔ)大作文三段寫作方略一
2014考研英語(yǔ)大作文第一段寫作方略:
第一句:圖畫描述句
第二句:圖畫影響句
1. This picture generates a great concern among the public.
這幅圖畫引起了公眾的極大關(guān)心。
2. This picture invokes the general public's interests.
這幅圖畫引起了公眾的興趣。
3. This picture has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo, the most influential social media in china.
這幅圖畫在微博上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國(guó)最有影響力的社交媒體)
4. This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the We Chat, the most influential social network, these days
最近,這幅圖畫在微信上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國(guó)最有影響力的社交網(wǎng)絡(luò))
5. This picture captures the online community's great attention and abundant imagination.
這幅圖畫引起了網(wǎng)絡(luò)群體的關(guān)注和想象。
6. People were drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture.
人們被這幅圖畫所揭示的事實(shí)所吸引。
第三句:圖畫意義句
1. Simple as the picture is, the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than
what we may sense at the first glance.
雖然圖畫很簡(jiǎn)單,但是作者卻在傳遞著比我們第一眼看到的要復(fù)雜很多,深刻很多的意義
2. This simple picture touches a deep cord of the complex social fabric.
這幅簡(jiǎn)單的圖畫深深觸及了復(fù)雜社會(huì)結(jié)構(gòu)的一環(huán)。
3. The drawing truly displays a status quo that is worthy of our attention.
這幅圖畫確實(shí)展現(xiàn)了值得我們關(guān)注的現(xiàn)狀。
4. We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.
對(duì)于圖畫所展現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題我們無(wú)法忽視。
5. It is tempting to accept the picture by its simple appearance, but to neglect the profound implication that its
author tries to convey.
讀這幅圖易望文生義,忽視其深刻主旨。
第一種類型:
當(dāng)下所面對(duì)的“無(wú)形社會(huì)問(wèn)題”的寫作步驟:
負(fù)面的展開(kāi):
適用于不好的社會(huì)問(wèn)題,社會(huì)責(zé)任,傳統(tǒng)美德,品質(zhì)的缺失
可能用到的主題詞:
1.愛(ài)國(guó)主義(Patriotism
2.努力工作(hardworking
3.勤儉(plain living,
4.相信科學(xué)(belief in science),
5.為人民服務(wù)的意識(shí)(consciousness of serving the people),
6.團(tuán)結(jié)互助(solidarity and helping each other),
7.誠(chéng)實(shí)守信(honesty } credibility and being trustworthy,
8.遵紀(jì)守法(observation of the law
9.中華傳統(tǒng)美德(traditional Chinese values
勤hardworking儉Thrift信honesty,,孝filial piety/ filial duty/filial respect
禮courtesy,忠loyalty,
仁benevolence,humanity and humaneness愛(ài)affection
10.現(xiàn)代美德(modern virtues
志愿者精神(volunteer spirit)
契約精神(spirit of contact, observation of the law, abiding faith of the law
第二段的展開(kāi):
…第一句:…
The picture does reveal that lack of credibffity is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal
life ,but to the further development of the whole society.
…第二句:…
In no country other than China, it has been said, is this problem more urgent and serious.
或者:
The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out,
bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.
或者:
The past three decades have witnessed our overwhelmingly excessive emphasis on material benefits and
unawareness of the importance of credibility which have been increasingly becoming indispensable to the health
of economy, the stability of polity and the pursuit of happiness.
過(guò)去的三十年中,我們過(guò)分的強(qiáng)調(diào)物質(zhì)利益,忽視了誠(chéng)信的重要性,而誠(chéng)信對(duì)于健康的經(jīng)濟(jì),穩(wěn)定的
社會(huì)和對(duì)于幸福的追求而言都是必不可少的。
…第三句…
More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice
the damaging consequences of dishonesty when undergoing the dramatic social transformation.
更具體的講,在經(jīng)歷劇烈的社會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)型的過(guò)程中,個(gè)人,企業(yè),組織甚至是整個(gè)社會(huì)都沒(méi)有能注意到誠(chéng)
信缺失帶來(lái)的危害。
或者
這種品質(zhì)對(duì)于這個(gè)國(guó)家的發(fā)展而言是重要的因素,它的缺失會(huì)不可避免的給我們?cè)斐晌:Α?/p>
或者
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),這種偉大的品質(zhì)鑄就了這個(gè)社會(huì)的支撐結(jié)構(gòu),如果這種寶貴的財(cái)富以任何一種方式被忽略,
我們的社會(huì)都無(wú)法穩(wěn)定發(fā)展。
…第四句和最后一句…
It is not hard to notice that without honesty/credibility, hardly can individuals or organizations make money,
take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world, I argue.
That will be a sorry state of affairs.
我認(rèn)為,不難發(fā)現(xiàn),要是沒(méi)有誠(chéng)信,在這樣一個(gè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中,從長(zhǎng)期來(lái)看個(gè)人和組織是很難
賺到錢,賺到利潤(rùn)的,更不必說(shuō)獲得財(cái)富了。那將是一個(gè)遺憾的局面。
或者:
…第四句和最后一句…
No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that the commitment to national and individual prosperity
requires a prevailing and flourishing trend of this driving force. Put it another way, were there no credibility, we
would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run.
任何一個(gè)有識(shí)之士都會(huì)承認(rèn),如果要致力于國(guó)家富強(qiáng)和個(gè)人幸福,就需要誠(chéng)信這種驅(qū)動(dòng)力形成流行和
繁榮之勢(shì)。換句話講,如果沒(méi)有誠(chéng)信,我們就不可能真正體會(huì)到真正的幸福和成功。這種品質(zhì)是社會(huì)發(fā)展
的基礎(chǔ),是我們不可能缺失的。
或者
Honesty and integrity, any perceptive observer would never hesitate to admit that, if become a general
feature of the society, would contribute to both the well-being of individuals and a nation as a whole.
任何一個(gè)有識(shí)之士都會(huì)承認(rèn),如果誠(chéng)信成為這個(gè)世界的總體特征,那么將不僅對(duì)個(gè)人利益有幫助而且
對(duì)整個(gè)國(guó)家也有好處。換句話講促進(jìn)人類社會(huì)往正確方向前進(jìn)的力量,真誠(chéng)的缺失會(huì)導(dǎo)致前進(jìn)的列車出軌,
會(huì)使得這個(gè)世界陷入一篇絕望的荒蕪之中。
3. Put another way, as a force propelling the human society forward in a virtuous direction, the
absence of the it will even cause the train of progress run off track, leaving the world in a
wilderness of desperation.
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