名師指導:2014考研英語大作文三段寫作方略一
2014考研英語大作文第一段寫作方略:
第一句:圖畫描述句
第二句:圖畫影響句
1. This picture generates a great concern among the public.
這幅圖畫引起了公眾的極大關心。
2. This picture invokes the general public's interests.
這幅圖畫引起了公眾的興趣。
3. This picture has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo, the most influential social media in china.
這幅圖畫在微博上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國最有影響力的社交媒體)
4. This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the We Chat, the most influential social network, these days
最近,這幅圖畫在微信上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國最有影響力的社交網絡)
5. This picture captures the online community's great attention and abundant imagination.
這幅圖畫引起了網絡群體的關注和想象。
6. People were drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture.
人們被這幅圖畫所揭示的事實所吸引。
第三句:圖畫意義句
1. Simple as the picture is, the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than
what we may sense at the first glance.
雖然圖畫很簡單,但是作者卻在傳遞著比我們第一眼看到的要復雜很多,深刻很多的意義
2. This simple picture touches a deep cord of the complex social fabric.
這幅簡單的圖畫深深觸及了復雜社會結構的一環。
3. The drawing truly displays a status quo that is worthy of our attention.
這幅圖畫確實展現了值得我們關注的現狀。
4. We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.
對于圖畫所展現的問題我們無法忽視。
5. It is tempting to accept the picture by its simple appearance, but to neglect the profound implication that its
author tries to convey.
讀這幅圖易望文生義,忽視其深刻主旨。
第一種類型:
當下所面對的“無形社會問題”的寫作步驟:
負面的展開:
適用于不好的社會問題,社會責任,傳統美德,品質的缺失
可能用到的主題詞:
1.愛國主義(Patriotism
2.努力工作(hardworking
3.勤儉(plain living,
4.相信科學(belief in science),
5.為人民服務的意識(consciousness of serving the people),
6.團結互助(solidarity and helping each other),
7.誠實守信(honesty } credibility and being trustworthy,
8.遵紀守法(observation of the law
9.中華傳統美德(traditional Chinese values
勤hardworking儉Thrift信honesty,,孝filial piety/ filial duty/filial respect
禮courtesy,忠loyalty,
仁benevolence,humanity and humaneness愛affection
10.現代美德(modern virtues
志愿者精神(volunteer spirit)
契約精神(spirit of contact, observation of the law, abiding faith of the law
第二段的展開:
…第一句:…
The picture does reveal that lack of credibffity is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal
life ,but to the further development of the whole society.
…第二句:…
In no country other than China, it has been said, is this problem more urgent and serious.
或者:
The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out,
bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.
或者:
The past three decades have witnessed our overwhelmingly excessive emphasis on material benefits and
unawareness of the importance of credibility which have been increasingly becoming indispensable to the health
of economy, the stability of polity and the pursuit of happiness.
過去的三十年中,我們過分的強調物質利益,忽視了誠信的重要性,而誠信對于健康的經濟,穩定的
社會和對于幸福的追求而言都是必不可少的。
…第三句…
More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice
the damaging consequences of dishonesty when undergoing the dramatic social transformation.
更具體的講,在經歷劇烈的社會轉型的過程中,個人,企業,組織甚至是整個社會都沒有能注意到誠
信缺失帶來的危害。
或者
這種品質對于這個國家的發展而言是重要的因素,它的缺失會不可避免的給我們造成危害。
或者
毫無疑問,這種偉大的品質鑄就了這個社會的支撐結構,如果這種寶貴的財富以任何一種方式被忽略,
我們的社會都無法穩定發展。
…第四句和最后一句…
It is not hard to notice that without honesty/credibility, hardly can individuals or organizations make money,
take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world, I argue.
That will be a sorry state of affairs.
我認為,不難發現,要是沒有誠信,在這樣一個競爭激烈的現代社會中,從長期來看個人和組織是很難
賺到錢,賺到利潤的,更不必說獲得財富了。那將是一個遺憾的局面。
或者:
…第四句和最后一句…
No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that the commitment to national and individual prosperity
requires a prevailing and flourishing trend of this driving force. Put it another way, were there no credibility, we
would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run.
任何一個有識之士都會承認,如果要致力于國家富強和個人幸福,就需要誠信這種驅動力形成流行和
繁榮之勢。換句話講,如果沒有誠信,我們就不可能真正體會到真正的幸福和成功。這種品質是社會發展
的基礎,是我們不可能缺失的。
或者
Honesty and integrity, any perceptive observer would never hesitate to admit that, if become a general
feature of the society, would contribute to both the well-being of individuals and a nation as a whole.
任何一個有識之士都會承認,如果誠信成為這個世界的總體特征,那么將不僅對個人利益有幫助而且
對整個國家也有好處。換句話講促進人類社會往正確方向前進的力量,真誠的缺失會導致前進的列車出軌,
會使得這個世界陷入一篇絕望的荒蕪之中。
3. Put another way, as a force propelling the human society forward in a virtuous direction, the
absence of the it will even cause the train of progress run off track, leaving the world in a
wilderness of desperation.
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