手把手教你寫2018英語專四高分作文
?手把手教你寫2018英語專四高分作文
2016年起英語專業(yè)四級考試(TEM-4)進(jìn)行重大改革,作文部分從以前的命題作文變成了命題材料作文,而取消了note-writing。時間為45分鐘,分?jǐn)?shù)是20分。
英語專四作文的形式大致為,給出一張表格陳述了一個論點的正反方意見,要求:The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
1英語專四作文到底該怎么寫?整個結(jié)構(gòu)如何?
在解答這個問題前,我們首先要了解作文到底要寫什么?很多學(xué)生養(yǎng)成了衣來伸手飯來張口的習(xí)慣,最期待任何一位老師能給自己一個模板,沒有自己的想法。作文寫什么并不是由哪個老師或者參考書說了算,作文寫什么需要看的是題目!
那么我們再細(xì)讀一下題目要求:write your response in about 200 words in which you shouldfirst summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. 很明顯:給定材料的summary(以下簡稱summary)和你自己的view(以下簡稱comments)是考試的兩個最核心的部分!
任何一個合適的結(jié)構(gòu)模式都應(yīng)該包含這兩個部分,而且應(yīng)該凸顯這兩個部分!所以,只要符合把summary和comments作為核心的寫作模式都是可以的,分成幾段話寫只是我們在探討用什么最優(yōu)化的模式把這些核心內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來!
因此,我們認(rèn)為把文章寫成四段話較為合理,因為能凸顯出兩個核心部分:
第一段:Background. 引入現(xiàn)象,略加闡述,點到為止,不可贅述(~20 words)。
第二段(核心之一!!!):Summary. 一句話說明人們持不同觀點+概括正反方觀點(70-80 words)。
第三段(核心之二!!!):Comments. 過渡句+自己的觀點(~90-100 words)
第四段:Conclusion. 總結(jié)全文(~20 words)。
注意:有些學(xué)校的老師希望分成經(jīng)典的三段式,這都沒有問題。作文本來就是開放式的東西,而且題目也并沒有告訴我們要寫幾段話!分成幾段并不是主要問題,只要你的作文能合理地體現(xiàn)核心即可!所以請不要再詢問某某參考書上為什么這樣寫?請用腦也用心去思考。舉個例子:有老師建議把我以上的第一段和第二段和在一起,原理上當(dāng)然可以,個人覺得開頭過于長了,結(jié)構(gòu)不太好看,但是老師的建議仍然可以。
2英語專四作文每段該怎么寫?
第一段:Background
給大家?guī)讉€經(jīng)典句型,自由組合即可,應(yīng)用方法在沖刺班已經(jīng)講授過,不再贅述。
Family education may exert a great impact on children’s behavior.
The past several years has witnessed the widespread use of genetically modified food.
Learning math plays an important role in everyday life.
This issue has captured numerous attentions from the general public.
Children’s education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.
比如:Recently, the use of Chinese characters, traditional or simplified, has attracted numerous attentions from politicians and scholars alike. Obviously this issue will exert profound influence on our national education. (29 words)
第二段:Summary
第一部分(以下五句任意選一句):
(1) There has been much controversy over _______.
(2) When it comes to _______, opinions vary greatly.
(3) ____ has given rise to a heated discussion.
(4) A heated debate has sprung up on ______.
(5) _______ has caused quite a stir among the general public.
第二部分:
Some people argue/suggest/insist that _______.
On the contrary, other believe/maintain that ______.
注意事項:
不要把材料里的所有觀點都寫入總結(jié);
只需要提煉材料里的Key Words,然后組成句子;
篇幅占約1/3(即70-80字左右),最多不能超過50%(100字);
不要完全照抄材料,進(jìn)行一定的替換,包括詞語替換、句式替換;
盡量簡潔明了,讓人一目了然。
比如:With regards to the controversial issue of whether we should revive traditional characters or continue using simplified ones, opinions vary greatly. Some people believe that traditional characters can better represent traditional culture, help to interpret ancient Chinese works, and unite Chinese people from all over the world. On the contrary, others argue that the simplified form, which is easier to learn and more convenient to use, can not only preserve traditional value but also lead to better communication. (78 words)
第三段:Comments
重大注意:文章是一個有機的整體,所以這里切勿自顧自論述,開頭應(yīng)該進(jìn)行結(jié)合上段,進(jìn)行一個簡單的過渡,否則會導(dǎo)致大量的失分!
第一種寫法思路:過渡句+犀利,即一邊倒,但是盡可能使用辯證的說法。
(1) When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one.
第二種寫作思路:過渡句+中庸,即支持正反。
(2) When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of equal weight.
比如:As the saying goes, “Every coin has its two sides”. There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the use of characters. However, as a college student, I am convinced that we should keep the simplified characters. To begin with, it is generally acknowledged that in mainland China simplified characters have been extensively applied in school education as well as in our daily life. If we instead promote the use of traditional characters, there would be language chaos in our country. Besides, efforts should be made to maintain the simplified form among Chinese people, since it is used by overwhelmingly large population. (104 words)
第四段:總結(jié)
注意:簡單小結(jié)!
比如:To sum up, it is the simplified characters that we should advocate to use. Traditional ones should be left for the experts to study, not for the general public. (29 words)
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