2018英語專四作文常見四類錯誤總結
2018英語專四作文常見四類錯誤總結
一,一個簡單句出現多個謂語
1. There are two pictures show something.
There be 句型中謂語動詞就是be 動詞,如果需要出現其他動詞,建議用非謂語動詞,to do ,或者doing, to do 表達目的,以及未發生的動作,doing,表達正在發生或者伴隨的動作。
所以此句正確寫法為, There are two pictures show ing something.
2. Parents want most is our care and company.
同理,此句,出現了兩個謂語動詞,want 和is ,多謂語,除了可以刪除一個動詞,改成簡單句,也可以加連詞,變成一個從句,此句,也可以有兩種改法。
第一種,want 變成wanting ,doing結構做主語,people 則是wanting 的邏輯主語, 所以,此句可以改成非常高大上的,獨立主格。
Parents wanting most is our care and company.
也可以改成,主語從句
What Parents want most is our care and company.
二,錯誤搭配
We should be grateful our parent……
對……感恩,句子表達應該為,be grateful to sb for sth
所以,此句正常表達是We should be grateful to our parent……
三,詞性混淆
Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because work or something.
在詞句子中,because 為連詞,連詞需要連接句子,而此句子中,because 之后只有名詞, 所以,此處應該改為,because of, 此外根據句意,something 后面應該接一個else.
此句正確表達是,Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because of work or something else.
四,無主句
1.As is vividly depicted in the photo that four persons are playing a football game.
此句子中,as,為連詞,that也是連詞,所以as 和 that之后均為從句,那此句的問題正是,全都是主句,無從句。建議刪掉一個連詞,保留一個作為主句。
此句正確表達是:As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are playing a football game.
2.The development of Chinese economy, which has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.
此句中,主句只剩 the development of Chinese economy, 無謂語,which 之后全是從句,所以詞句,需要把which 刪掉,讓has offered 作謂語。
正確表達The development of Chinese economy has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.
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