【托福提分】新托福寫作中7個常見錯誤整理
雖說托福寫作并非內(nèi)地考生的難點，但是很多考生還是會犯下一些常見的錯誤。tpo小站老師介紹說，只要我們認(rèn)真?zhèn)淇迹眯拇痤}，很多時候是可以避開這些錯誤的。下面就一起來看看這些錯誤吧!
拼寫錯誤
這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的手誤，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。
In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.
judgement應(yīng)改為judgment
亂用詞語
First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn’t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題：
1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能連用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
托福寫作低分原因——用詞不當(dāng)
學(xué)生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。
In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
problems應(yīng)改為questions
過分中式化
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.
該句的表達(dá)過于中式化。
重復(fù)啰嗦
They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.
前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
語法錯誤
To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent
舉例不當(dāng)
For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。
詞性錯誤
However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。
綜上所述，以上就是我們tpo小站老師介紹的幾點錯誤，希望大家在托福考試中合理規(guī)避這些問題，也多從錯誤中總結(jié)教訓(xùn)，并養(yǎng)成善于總結(jié)的好習(xí)慣。
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