【實(shí)例解析】優(yōu)化托福獨(dú)立寫作 學(xué)會(huì)使用反駁式開頭
對于托福寫作中，好的開頭很可能是成功的一大半。而反駁式開頭的巧妙使用也會(huì)讓全文內(nèi)容非常引人注意。反駁式開頭首先要“以退為進(jìn)”，肯定題目觀點(diǎn)有一定的價(jià)值，然后指出這種說法的不足之處，最后拋出自己的觀點(diǎn)。下面就讓我們一起來看些例題來詳解反駁式開頭。
看一下這道例題，Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.
It is true that environmental problems such as air pollution and water pollution will exert huge negative effects on public health. （承認(rèn)合理性） However, taking environmental problems as the best way to improve public health only represents an insufficient analysis which fails to see the environmental disparities between different regions.（反駁其局限性）Whether it is the best solution depends on specific circumstances. If environmental problems are not imminent enough that require swift actions, then there should be some other factors such as food security, drug regulation, hospital investment and medical insurance that also affect public health to a great extent.（自己的論點(diǎn)）
相同的開頭方式，再看另一道題目。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.
Undoubtedly, high income is greatly valued by many job hunters in view of the mounting cost of living. After all, abundant money can provide people with good food and spacious house as well as excellent education opportunities. （承認(rèn)合理性)）However, the top concern of people when choosing a job varies a lot. （反駁局限性）)In my opinion, it ignores other factors such as working environment and promotion system that also greatly influence people perspectives on jobs.（自己觀點(diǎn)）
反駁式的開頭的正確使用能讓文章開門見山，帶給人明確的寫作思路。建議大家在備考的時(shí)候也可以多多練習(xí)此類文章開頭，對于文章的提升會(huì)有一定的幫助。
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