【托福寫作備考】寫作訓練分析及范文（五）
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新托福寫作中我們該盡量讓文章言簡意賅，用詞精準。根據國外學者的調查統計，一個以句號結尾的英語句子，單詞的數量最好不要超過20個，否則的話，句子偏長，聽話人的注意力有可能不集中，漏聽一、兩個單詞，從而影響對整個句子的理解。以下內容中，我們就通過實例為大家分析托福寫作的一些經典范文。
Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
參考分析：
不能同意。
確實，有些時候快速做出的決定可能是錯的。(舉例)
然而，決定是否正確還有很多其他影響因素，并且，快不等于not careful。極端的例子是戰場上的指揮官，必須要快速做出正確決定。羅列幾個影響“決定正確與否”的其他因素。
迅速作出的決定永遠是錯誤的，這個觀點是不對的
(1)有些決定非常容易作出，不用很長時間想，所以肯定正確。比如說，家里沒有吃的，應當采購。這種決定永遠是正確的。
(2)很多人的實際經驗非常豐富，他們在碰到相似的情況的時候，做決定非常迅速。而且總是對。
(3)雖然有些時候，快速做出的決定有錯誤，但是總是說他錯是非常絕對的。在考試中，不假思索地進行選擇題的成功率還是25%。所以，總是錯是不對的。
參考范文：
Are quick decisions always wrong?
I agree with the statements that the decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Those quick decisions that people make are like bids in a gambling. Even if they have a chance to win, they are still losers theoretically.
People should never make quick decisions without fully considering the factors that are influencing their decisions and the consequences of different decisions.
When people make hasty decisions, they rarely care anything about the situation. Situation is a very important factor in making a right decision. Different decisions lead to different results, so it is very important to make a decision carefully. People who make quick decisions do not have time to look around and carefully analyze the consequences resulted by different decisions.
Secondly, there is a popular belief that people should decide quickly in order to catch opportunities. Unfortunately, that notion is completely wrong. If you made a quick decision without thinking carefully, how could you be able to catch the opportunities? "Chance favors the prepared mind," as a famous saying goes. Only when you have fully prepared, can you really grab a good opportunity when time come. Otherwise the chance that you take hastily may result in a failure.
Thirdly, even if you can quickly analyze the situation based on the facts that are provided to you at the time that you make a decision, since you do not have enough time to verify the validity of those information, the information could be wrong, which could leads to wrong decisions. Even the president of the United States can make this kind of mistake. Mr. Bush made a decision to start the War on Iraq based on the false information that his subordinates provided to him, which claims that Iraq has dangerous biochemical weapons. Maybe someday history will prove that the decision to start the War was wrong.
Life is not a lottery. Life is a stock market. Only when you make careful decisions based on thorough analysis, can you win. If you make quick decisions, chances are that these decisions will happen to be wrong, and you may lose everything down to your underwear.
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