【托福寫作備考】寫作訓練分析及范文（六）
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新托福寫作中我們該盡量讓文章言簡意賅，用詞精準。根據國外學者的調查統計，一個以句號結尾的英語句子，單詞的數量最好不要超過20個，否則的話，句子偏長，聽話人的注意力有可能不集中，漏聽一、兩個單詞，從而影響對整個句子的理解。以下內容中，我們就通過實例為大家分析托福寫作的一些經典范文。
參考分析：
我認為不應當以第一印象來評判人
(1)人們喜歡用相貌作為第一印象，作為評判標準，有些人長的不好看，所以就失去了機會。
(2)用第一印象來評判人，會造成很多不公平的現象發生
(3)用第一印象來評判人，會失去很多優秀的人才
參考范文：
Are first impressions trustworthy?
In our social life, we may meet different people in different occasions. Some of them we may meet once; others may be staying with us for a long time, such as our classmates, or our colleagues. Some people trust their first impressions because they believe these judgments are generally correct. While other people do not judge a person quickly because they think first impressions are often wrong. Before I give my opinion, I want analyze the two opinions first.
We can see that both the two sides have their reasons. But I prefer not to judge people in our first meetings. Because to me, I'm not very good at judging people and my first impressions are usually unreliable.
本文標題：【托福寫作備考】寫作訓練分析及范文（六） - 托福范文_托福考試作文Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
參考分析：
我認為不應當以第一印象來評判人
(1)人們喜歡用相貌作為第一印象，作為評判標準，有些人長的不好看，所以就失去了機會。
(2)用第一印象來評判人，會造成很多不公平的現象發生
(3)用第一印象來評判人，會失去很多優秀的人才
參考范文：
Are first impressions trustworthy?
In our social life, we may meet different people in different occasions. Some of them we may meet once; others may be staying with us for a long time, such as our classmates, or our colleagues. Some people trust their first impressions because they believe these judgments are generally correct. While other people do not judge a person quickly because they think first impressions are often wrong. Before I give my opinion, I want analyze the two opinions first.
For those who trust first impressions, they may argue as follows. For one thing, before two people first meet, they have no ideas about what the other person is like, and then they may have no inclination to cater to each other by behaving differently. At those circumstances, it is a little bit easy to get to know the person's real character because they may behave naturally. In addition, some mysterious factors such as instinct may involve in the first impression which usually is proved to be the right one with no reasonable account, as is especially occurred in many married couple's first meeting.
The other group of people who do not believe in first impression also have their reasons. First, people's characters are different and complex. It is very hard to get to know them at the first meeting. If you want to know a person, you have to spend lot of time to talk to them, and observe their behaviors at different occasions, and all these cannot be accomplished just in a few hours. Second, many people do not behave naturally when they meet strangers, so the first meeting will not be a good chance to know a person.
We can see that both the two sides have their reasons. But I prefer not to judge people in our first meetings. Because to me, I'm not very good at judging people and my first impressions are usually unreliable.
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