【托福寫(xiě)作范文】托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作高分范例——舞蹈在文化中的重要角色
對(duì)于托福備考來(lái)說(shuō)，想要提升自己的成績(jī)充分的備考時(shí)間和方法是比不可少的。而對(duì)于中國(guó)考生而言，在托福寫(xiě)作中，所缺少的并是詞匯量和句型掌握，而更多的是邏輯思維的運(yùn)用和展開(kāi)。那么，相信在以下一些滿分范例的閱讀中就會(huì)為大家?guī)?lái)不少的備考靈感。
托福IBT高分作文：
Does dancing play an important role in a culture?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
托福IBT高分作文分析：
這個(gè)題目乍看起來(lái)很不好寫(xiě)。同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)(Dancing is really important in every culture.)。可以采取it depends的策略。舞蹈的娛樂(lè)作用(as a important mean of entertainments)也是important role in a culture，所以種文化中都有其獨(dú)特的舞蹈形式(dancing form)。
原始社會(huì)(primitive society)時(shí)，舞蹈是非常重要的。慶祝(celebration; festival)，祈禱(pray)，宗教儀式(ritual)等等活動(dòng)中，舞蹈都是最主要的組成部分(one of the most important components)。
隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，宗教儀式(ritual)演變成了歌劇(opera)，舞蹈仍然是很重要的娛樂(lè)手段。
時(shí)間進(jìn)入21世紀(jì)，各種娛樂(lè)手段開(kāi)始豐富起來(lái)，舞蹈盡管已經(jīng)不是主流的(main)娛樂(lè)方式，但是仍然非常重要。今年的奧斯卡(Oscar)得主就是一個(gè)歌舞劇(musical drama)——芝加哥(Chicago).
托福IBT高分作文范文：舞蹈在文化中的重要角色
There are a number of qualities that have always been present in cultures, recent or ancient. These qualities can be anything from art forms to culturally gained knowledge. These qualities make the culture unique, and allow the culture to offer something interesting to the world. Throughout history, dancing has always played such a role in cultures. This is because dance allows us to express emotion, preserve heritage, and entertain.
Dancing has always held a high position in culture, as it is an excellent way of expressing emotion. Much like the painter using color to convey emotion, dancers can use their body as a tool to show the onlooker their happiness, sadness, pain, etc.
Dancing is also an excellent method of retaining and preserving culture. Many cultures have dance as part of their ceremonies, whether the ceremony is religious or patriotic in form. For example, it is a widely practiced norm to have people dance out a glorious moment in battle. In religion, it is common for people to dance to appease the God or Gods. Because of this, dancing is an excellent way to maintain culture, and ensure that important moments of the past are not forgotten.
In modern days, it is much more common for dancing to be seen as a form of entertainment. Dancing has become somewhat of a sport in some countries, for example, ballroom dancing is very popular in the United States. There are hundreds of bars and disco clubs all over China which focus on dancing. They provide disc jockeys, more commonly referred to as "D.J.s", and play loud, repetitive music which encourages the young people to dance. There are many different styles of dance, but all bring the dancer to have fun, and get a good workout at the same time.
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