托福寫(xiě)作中如何用辯證的態(tài)度去應(yīng)對(duì)托福獨(dú)立性寫(xiě)作呢?下面小編通過(guò)一篇范文來(lái)為大家講解，希望大家能夠從中發(fā)現(xiàn)一些對(duì)自己備考有用的東西。下面就跟小編一起來(lái)看看吧。

題目：If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose ? Why ? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

如果你被要求送一樣可以代表你國(guó)家的東西到一個(gè)國(guó)際展覽，你會(huì)選擇什么? 為什么?用具體的原因和細(xì)節(jié)解釋你的選擇。

范文如下：

When asked to send something representative of their country to an international exhibition, most people tend to think of specific objects. However,I would send something completely different: one week’s worth of television programming. I feel that TV programs are a good representation of my country because they show how we live, what we value, and what we teach our children.

◎ 這個(gè)開(kāi)始段寫(xiě)得好，最大的特點(diǎn)是：清晰 ( clarity ).清晰的中心論點(diǎn) (thesis statement ): one week’s worth of television programming.讓讀者一開(kāi)始就了解文章的“統(tǒng)攝性 governing”的觀點(diǎn)。隨后，作者列舉了三個(gè)論點(diǎn)：展示了我們?nèi)绾紊?how we live)，我們珍視什么( what we value )，我們教孩子們什么( what we teach our children)。”萬(wàn)事開(kāi)頭難“，有了這個(gè)開(kāi)始，這篇文章的”連貫 coherence”就有保證，讀者也就有了“沒(méi)有懸念的閱讀”，這正是托福獨(dú)立性寫(xiě)作的核心：展示“三識(shí)“---知識(shí)( knowledge )，常識(shí) ( common sense ) 和見(jiàn)識(shí)( insight )。事實(shí)上，ETS的評(píng)委并沒(méi)有一定要期待”驚世駭俗的論點(diǎn)“，觀點(diǎn)只要清楚，合理即可。下面，就是一個(gè)”自圓其說(shuō) 。Convincing “的過(guò)程。

TV programs show how we live in my country. For example, they show the different ways we make our living. The different kinds of houses we live in, the different types of relationships we have, and the different sorts of activities that fill our days. In short, they give a broad representation of daily life in my country.

◎ 段落寫(xiě)作中，可以展示一個(gè)考生寫(xiě)作能力的要素是三個(gè)：銜接cohesiveness, 邏輯logic and 措辭wording 。這一段中的 cohesiveness 在哪里? For example...... In short......,一個(gè)是“例證 examplification “,另外一個(gè)是 ”總結(jié) summarization “, 讓讀者能一下“辨識(shí) identification “”Inter-sentences logic 句際邏輯”。這是段落寫(xiě)作中需要經(jīng)常練習(xí)的。其次是邏輯，邏輯要如何得到保證? “語(yǔ)法 grammar”,這一段中用了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，四個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。尤其是四個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句的使用，是按照排比結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)使用的，這種語(yǔ)言上的處理，又把英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作提升到了一個(gè)高度：”修辭 rhetoric “.再來(lái)看”措辭 wording”,從題目中的 “representative 到這個(gè)段落中的representation “這樣的詞性轉(zhuǎn)換應(yīng)用了英文語(yǔ)法的另外一個(gè)概念”nominalization 名詞化“，這讓整個(gè)作文的行文更加”抽象abstract”和”正式 formal “.

TV programs also show what we value in my country. Comedy programs, for instance, demonstrate what we think is funny, while documentaries show what issues we are concerned about and how we want to resolve them. Sports programs show which sports are more and less popular as well as how we approach competition. In general, the range of programs that appear on TV demonstrate what we think is important and interesting and worth our while to spend time on.

◎ 這一段寫(xiě)作值得學(xué)習(xí)的是寫(xiě)作手法和語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作手法來(lái)說(shuō)，最主要的是對(duì)”value”的解釋，使用了”classification 分類“的方法：comedy, documentary and sports，選擇表現(xiàn)”價(jià)值“的這三個(gè)方面具有代表性，也是文章中心”電視“最主要的內(nèi)容。在語(yǔ)言寫(xiě)作上： demonstrate what is funny; show what we concern and how we resolve; how we approach competition. 這幾組詞的動(dòng)詞搭配和選擇非常”準(zhǔn)確 accurate”,符合語(yǔ)言“達(dá)”的層次。

Children’s programs show what we think is important to teach our children. Some programs are designed to specifically teach reading and math skills. Others expose children to classic stories from literature or to traditional folktales. And some programs, such as cartoons are simply meant to be enjoyed, which is also something we teach our children to do.

You can learn a good deal about a country by watching its television programs. You can learn about daily life, values, and education. That is why I would send a week’s worth of TV programs from my country to an international exhibition.

上面就是為大家?guī)?lái)的用辯證的態(tài)度對(duì)待托福獨(dú)立性寫(xiě)作，希望對(duì)大家托福寫(xiě)作備考有幫助。最后小編預(yù)祝大家托福考試能取得理想的成績(jī)。

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