托福獨(dú)立寫作例子拓展：學(xué)會(huì)“具體化”
寫好托福開頭段后，托福寫作中的主體段例子的表達(dá)往往決定了同學(xué)們托福寫作能否達(dá)到高分，對(duì)于例子，敲擊鍵盤時(shí)同學(xué)們或多或少會(huì)冒出一些，但是你寫的例子是否正確呢?怎么寫出正確合適的例子呢?
寫正確的例子，我們先看一道考題
2017年1月14號(hào)
As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the
university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ;
2、Students must volunteer to work in the university' s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university?Why?
題目問大學(xué)生在假期的長(zhǎng)假中拿出一個(gè)月的時(shí)間做事情
1.學(xué)一門和主修專業(yè)沒有直接關(guān)聯(lián)的課程;
2.在大學(xué)所在的城市或者家鄉(xiāng)做有助改善城市或者家鄉(xiāng)的志愿者工作
這里我們先從選第一個(gè)來舉例說明。
來說一說“選擇一門和主修沒有關(guān)聯(lián)的課程”的好處
舉例方法：寫一個(gè)具體的身邊人
怎么寫，如何創(chuàng)造可能有點(diǎn)大，我們用“編造”來形容大家可能更容易接受。在舉例中出現(xiàn)的人不必用名人，也就是說寫喬布斯，普京很有可能在例子上的得分不如我寫隔壁老王或者小張，關(guān)鍵在于圍繞主題的具體人物。
For instance, Zhang Jing, one of my next of kins, chose to learn English interpretation course last summer vacation. In spite of majoring in sociology, she still found it very useful to learn English interpretation. In the beginning of this year, she succeeded in getting more than dozens of chances for interview in multi-national companies because her interpretation skills gave her edge in the first round of screening. That means choosing a course on the subject that does not directly link with your major can also be very helpful.
這里的例子中我們來看幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)說一下具體
人物具體：包括姓、名以及和你的關(guān)系;這里我們用one of my next of kins一個(gè)近親來做例子。
內(nèi)容具體：雖然張靜的主修專業(yè)是社會(huì)學(xué)(專業(yè)具體)，她選擇了一門與主修專業(yè)無關(guān)的英語口譯課(課程具體)，last summer vacation的時(shí)間和題目要求的long break 和one month 的時(shí)間符合，最終張靜同學(xué)因?yàn)樗龑W(xué)過口譯課程而學(xué)會(huì)的口譯技巧，使得她獲得了很多跨國企業(yè)的面試機(jī)會(huì)(結(jié)果具體)，這樣就體現(xiàn)出了因?yàn)檫x擇一門與主修專業(yè)無關(guān)的課程而帶來的好處。
按照以上的“具體化”建議，如果要選擇第二個(gè)選項(xiàng)“在大學(xué)所在的城市或者家鄉(xiāng)做有助改善城市或者家鄉(xiāng)的志愿者工作”，各位是否掌握了怎么去寫例子呢?
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