上海中考英語作文范文八
I want to invent a special machine
In modern life we have many inventions which have made great influence on us. They can work out various problems millions of times faster than a person can. As for me, I want to invent a special machine which can help us to cope with the rubbish. Due to the badly polluted environment, it is quite difficult for us to breathe fresh air and drink clean water. Therefore, if I can invent the machine, I hope that it will change the rubbish into some kind of fertilizer, and help the crops grow fast. The above problem would be solved. I am looking forward to realizing my expectation of my machine.
精彩亮點分析：
亮點一：定語從句修飾各種發明物
亮點二：have a great influence on sb. 固定短語
亮點三：work out…表達解決各種問題，使用恰當
亮點四：定語從句修飾修飾此發明，言簡意賅
亮點五：固定句型：it is + adj. +for sb. to do sth.
亮點六：look forward to doing結尾表達美好期待
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