上海中考英語作文范文五
I want to invent a robot
Currently, there is a growing awareness that students have a lot of pressure. I want to invent a robot that can help us solve it.
On one hand, it can be regarded as a teacher, that is to say, as long as we are confronted with the problems, we can ask them for help. On the other hand, it enables us to feel relaxed because of the pressure. In other words, it is necessary for us to be faced with the difficulties when it gives us a smile. To calm down helps us to think clearly and make the best decision for us. That’s what I have learnt from its smile.
In a word, the robot not only gives us a helping hand, but also encourages us to discover the power lying within ourselves and achieve our goals.
精彩亮點分析：
亮點一：定語從句修飾對闡述對現(xiàn)狀的焦慮
亮點二：用as long as 引導狀語從句，抓人眼球
亮點三：to calm down 非謂語結(jié)構
亮點四： a helping hand 詞組搭配更高端
亮點五：每句不同詞組轉(zhuǎn)換
亮點六：結(jié)尾升華
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