上海中考英語作文范文六
I want to invent a time machine
As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learning about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learning from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I cannot only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out.
精彩亮點分析：
亮點一：定語從句修飾對學生現在的生活
亮點二：用would rather … than … 表達學生的意愿
亮點三：用if條件狀語從句表達主題
亮點四：be famous for 因…而著名
亮點五：not only … but … as well 不但…而且…
亮點六：用動名詞詞組做主語
亮點七：用idiom突出歷史的重要性
亮點八：定語從句表達學生的期待
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