上海中考英語作文范文三
I want to invent a kind of medicine
If you ask me what I want to invent? I will say a kind of medicine which can cure cancer.As we all know, many people suffer from cancer and die at a very young age these years. For this, countless families lost their beloved family members, then feel painful for the rest of their lives. What a terrible thing it is! So, doing something quickly for them is rather necessary, I’d like to devote my life to it!
精彩亮點分析：
亮點一：條件狀語從句，主將從現，引出中心思想。
亮點二：at a very young age 在年輕時。
亮點三：beloved 摯愛的。
亮點四：for the rest of their lives 余生。
亮點五：What a terrible thing it is! 感嘆句表達這種病的嚴重性。
亮點六：So, doing something quickly for them is necessary! 主語從句結尾，句式新穎，點明主題。
亮點七： devote one’s life to … 把…獻給，強烈表明作者的決心。
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