感激的人:謝謝你,朋友-Thank You, My Friend
【內容提示】
你喜歡某門學科,比如英語吧。你參加了你們縣或你們市組織的該學科奧林匹克比賽,但是失敗了。你非常懊喪。正在這時,你收到一封朋友的來信,信中用“失敗是成功之母”之類的話給你鼓勁。在該同學的鼓勵和幫助下你第二次參加了比賽并獲得一等獎。
【作文示范】
Thank You, My Friend
I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom①.
I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest②. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. “What a pity!” I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.
I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.
Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, “Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence③. Keep on your study and you will succeed!” I knew it was from the good friend of mine.
These words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.
I am very lucky to have such a good friend. I'm thankful to him for his help.
(選自《英語畫刊》高中版1996年第4期)
【詞語解釋】
①wisdom ['wizd m] n.智慧;明智
②contest ['k&ntest] n.比賽;競賽
③confidence ['k&nfid ns] n.信心;自信
【寫法指要】
作者由失敗到成功走過一段曲折的路。有過失敗的人才知道勝利的價值。作者把自己的成功歸功于自己一位好朋友的鼓勵。所以,他對自己的朋友十分感激并寫了此文。文章由失敗、挫折寫到鼓勵、幫助,再到獲獎,順理成章
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