一因多果說(shuō)明:過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)-Workload Too Demanding
過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)
【內(nèi)容提示】
給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門話題。那么，你認(rèn)為學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)重不重？重在哪里？過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)會(huì)造成什么樣的后果？請(qǐng)你就這些問(wèn)題，結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶?，并將你的看法寫成一篇因果說(shuō)明文。
【作文示范】
Workload Too Demanding
We are at senior high school. Every day, we have many exercises that we can＇t complete and many books that we can＇t finish reading. The teachers continually repeat the words that we are already able to recite.
Teachers and students all work hard in order to improve the percentages① of those entering college. But the burden of work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports, which has left many of us in poor health. What＇s worse, many students have lost interest in their studies altogether.
It is known to all that good health is as important as knowledge. Virtues② such as bravery, discipline and love of our motherland can＇t be learned only in classes, but should also be learned through social practice. We should be given the time and opportunity to be exposed to society so we can learn what can＇t be taught from books.
We are young and we have young hearts. We love study as well as amusements. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.
（選自1997年1月8日《英文21世紀(jì)報(bào)》）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①percentage[p ＇sentidN] n．百分?jǐn)?shù)；百分率
②virtue[＇v :tju:]n．美德；道德
【寫法指要】
本文第一段和第二段前半部分是擺學(xué)校課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)重的事實(shí)，談的是原因。從第二段后半部分開(kāi)始分析負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重帶來(lái)的結(jié)果。作者分析了四種結(jié)果，即負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重會(huì)影響身體健康（poor health），會(huì)使學(xué)生失去學(xué)習(xí)興趣（lost interest），會(huì)使學(xué)生學(xué)不到社會(huì)公德（social virtues），還會(huì)使學(xué)生失去娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)（amusements）的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，本文是一因多果說(shuō)明文。
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