范文:For a better understaning between Panernts and Children
「要求」
你和你的父母之間有代溝嗎？你認為代溝存在的原因是什么？應該如何解決這個問題呢？請寫一篇短文。
「范文」
FOR A BETTER UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PARENTS AND CHILDREN
Nowadays， there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date， while parents can't approve of what their children say and do. Thus， a big generation gap is formed.
The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends， select their own classes in school， plan their own future ， earn and spend their own money ，and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also， young children wish to be understood by their parents， but most parents don't quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school . Therefore， misunderstanding often arise from parents' tendency to interfere in children's daily activities. In my opinion， most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.
「評語」
本文基本是按照提出問題──分析問題──解決問題的順序構思：先描寫現象，再分析原因，最后找出解決的對策。這樣行文符合一般的思維邏輯，在分析原因時注意從雙方找原因，而且以對比的形式表現出來，給人的印象鮮明，說理透徹。為什么不把這篇短文譯成中文念給你的父母聽呢？
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