范文:The profession I would like to take up
「要求」
你長大后想從事什么樣的職業？選擇你最想作的一種工作寫一篇100字左右的英語短文。在文中談談你為什么要選擇這種職業的理由以及這種職業的特點。文章的題目是“The profession I would like to take up”。
「范文」
The profession I would like to take up
In this society， we can choose between many professions. For example， one can be a worker， a teacher， a clerk， a novelist， a journalist， a doctor， a singer or a nurse. Which profession I like most？ Among all， I think， when I grow up， I wish to be a teacher.
In my eyes， teaching is the most important and noblest profession in the world.
Of all the professions， maybe it's not the most successful one， but in terms of the cultivation of intellectual powers， none is more decisive than teaching. Whether a country is strong or weak depends on the general level of education of her citizens， therefore， teachers play an important role in society.
Teachers need to have a wide knowledge. That is why a prospective teacher should remember that knowledge is a matter of scientific learning and neither dishonesty nor conceit is permitted. On the contrary， what is required is honesty and modesty.
「評語」
該文清晰明朗，從開篇即提出“現在世界上有那么多職業，我最喜歡的是哪一種呢？”然后明確地表達出中心思想：“我將來想做一個教師”。第二段，從對比的角度說出教師的偉大和平凡，言簡意賅。第三段，則從另一個角度，說出作一名教師應該具備的素質。
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