范文:Electricity
「要求」
為了配合國際能源周活動，學校英語周報要發行一期能源特刊，總編周老師約你圍繞“電”這個主題寫一篇稿，并給出了提綱。
電在我們的社會中發揮著至關重要的作用。
如果沒有電，……
由此看來，……
「范文」
Electricity
Electricity plays a vital role in our society. First of all， electricity is used for lighting. Electric lamps illuminate millions of families， bringing people brightness， comfort and convenience. Secondly， in industry， as one source of energy， electricity is used to drive machines. It helps to raise productivity， which makes it possible for mankind to produce a great quantity of goods. Moreover， electrified trains， films， televisions and refrigerators are all based on electricity.
If the world were deprived of electricity， the whole society would be unable to function in its normal way. Cities would be plunged into darkness， industrial production would be reduced to standstill， and all electric apparatus would stop working. In shout， people would feel totally helpless.
Therefore， on the one hand， we must waste no electricity， on the other we should develop our electric industry so as to generate sufficient electric power to meet the need of society.
「評語」
本文根據題目給出的提示展開議論。第一段舉出事實說明電在當今社會所起的巨大作用；第二段寫如果沒有電，人類社會就無法正常運轉；第三段寫既然電如此重要，我們應該大力發展電力工業，并節約用電。全文層次分明，主題突出。舉例恰當， 語言簡練，表達清楚。
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