范文:Health
「要求」
健康是革命的本錢，請以“health”為題目寫篇100單詞的英語小短文。每段的中心句已經給出：
Health is the foundation of one's future success.
What should we do to maintain and enhance our health？
Health is more important than wealth.
「范文」
Health
It is clear that health is the foundation of one's future success. If you become sick， it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively. On the other hand， if you are strong， you can go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of you.
Now that we know that health is the source of our energy， what should we do to maintain and enhance our health？ First， we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles. Second， we should keep regular hours of our lives. If we get up early， we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise， and this habit can do wonders for our outlook on life. Third， there is a proverb that says， “Prevention is better than cure.”
In conclusion， health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but lose their health are no more fortunate than those who are poor. If you want your wish to come true， health is the most important ingredient of your success.
「評語」
該文為行云流水，結構清楚而緊湊。開篇說明健康的重要性。在第二段里，分了三個層次來闡釋“健康是我們能量的源泉”，而且還有提問句來引導下面的回答。最后一段，“in conclusion”，總結了全文，而且有所提高。
Understand your health benefits and keep track of them.
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