范文:I Am a Cat
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「要求」
以“I Am a……”為題，描寫一種動物，寫出其基本習性、特點。（100字左右）
「范文」
I Am a Cat
I am a cat. I am pretty and always wear a soft fur coat. I also wear soft shoes and can walk noiselessly.
I dislike mice. They are a great nuisance to people. Whenever and wherever there are mice， I will catch them and kill them.
I like to stay at home and play with a ball of string. I always sleep in the day time and get up at night. I can see clearly in the dark.
I'm lazy and greedy sometimes. I steal fish and catch birds to eat. But people still like me.
「評語」
寫這類文章要發揮一定的想象力。本文用擬人、比喻等手法，生動活潑，如“fur coat”、“soft shoes”等十分有趣。文字通順，沒有什么毛病，但可能太簡單了些，句式上應該有所變化。
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