范文:The Rush to Cities
「要求」
要求：隨著經濟的發展，中國的城市化速度越來越快，大量人口擁入城市，在促進城市發展的同時，也帶來不少問題，請你對此談一下看法。
「范文」
The Rush to Cities
With the development of economy ， more and more people rush to cities. Some people rush to cities in order to look for jobs and earn more money while others want to learn new knowledge and improve the quality of their personal life.
Opportunities for bright young people are greater in the cities.
But there exist some problems. For example， owing to the increasing population， the housing and traffic problem are becoming more and more serious. And the rush of the country people to cities also leads to the rise in crimes.
To solve these problems， the government should take effective measures to control the population and make them live orderly. Also some opportunities should be created for the country people to receive education and improve their quality of life.
「評語」
本文成功之處在于，行文恰當，合理地運用了一些成語、習慣用語和固定搭配等表達方式，使文意的表達準確有力，形象生動。
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