范文:Opportunity
「要求」
題目：機會（opportunity），機會，對每個人的成才都很重要，不同的人對機會有著不同的看法。在人的一生中，你會面臨許多機會，也會錯過很多機會。那么你是怎樣看待機會的呢？請寫一篇短文談談你對機會的看法。
「范文」
Opportunity
Some people regard opportunity as the most important part of their life. It's the way to success. So when they see their friends succeed， they will complain that they are not lucky enough to have the opportunity. But other people think that opportunity is sheer luck， with their hard work， knowledge and skill， opportunity will be waiting for them everywhere.
Although the attitudes towards opportunity are different， opportunity is important indeed， and no one should neglect. It can make a person successful. We should grasp every valuable opportunity and make good use of it， otherwise nothing can be left with us but regret and disappointment.
But I think it is not opportunity itself that decides a person's success or failure. It is fair to every person， I think. To grasp the opportunity， we need knowledge， skill and experience. In a word， opportunity is important but not decisive.
「評語」
本文層層推進，首先列舉兩種對立的觀點，然后闡述機會的重要性，最后以自己的觀點結束全文。文章很有深度。從語言上講，說理透徹，也很生動，避免了題目一大就空的毛病。此外，文章在邏輯上嚴密，觀點不偏不倚，不失為一佳作。
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