大學英語作文模板: 論時間
寫作范文：
①As is vividly betrayed in the cartoon, a juvenile, with great efforts, is pushing a clock hand forward，because he is curious about his future. An old man, however, is doing his utmost to push the clock hand backward, because he wants to retrospect his old days. ②Apparently what they do is ultimately futile.
①Simple as the picture is, which subtly conveys is profound and thought-provoking. ②There is little dispute that time is a sovereign gift for all people and no one is expected to manipulate or speed it up. ③So, attempting a life is filled with no regrets, one should employ his time well, otherwise, a humiliating future will be not far away from us. ④In addition, the old saying:“Time and tide wait for no man” also highlights the magnitude of cherishing time. ⑤Therefore, what we are supposed to do everyday is to make use of every chance to do useful things.
①As far as I'm concerned, time invariably treats everyone equally. ②One can become informed and wise by treasuring time. ③Mo Yan, for example, who cherishes every minute to think and contemplate，and he has achieved great success in his works. ④Hence let's keep the aphorism in mind forever, that is: “A young idler,an old beggar”.
原作點評：
第一段描述圖畫的內容，應注意拼寫問題。第二段揭示圖畫的寓意，深入探討珍惜時間的重要性；第①句注意時態的正確使用；第②句注意單詞拼寫及動副結構的使用。第三段通過舉名人的例子及格言“少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲”，點明文章主題。總體點評文章亮點：文章結構完整，每個段落的功能基本得以體現。
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