大學(xué)英語四級常見低分作文：8分范文
英語四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
1. 本題滿分為15分
2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。
3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為所閱文章與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分);若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。
4. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
5. 2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。
8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。
14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。
[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。]
作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7
下面看一下作文得分8分的范文。
8分
Nowdays, many parents do everything for their children. There are many reasons for parents to do that. The first one is that they love their children and want them live better. All these things makes the children don’t know how to live without parents. They don’t know how to be independent。
What the parents do have a really bad effect to their children. So they should try another way. They should teach their children how to do things instead of doing things for them. Then, they should let the children know that they would leave one day and children must live by themselves. So the children have to learn to live alone when it is not too late. Next, parents should put it into practice. They may creat more chance for children to live alone when children are young。
If parents do well in these ways, their children will surely know how to be independent。
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