2018 年12月英語四級寫作真題第一套解析
【整體解析】
本次四級作文又回到了大學(xué)生熟悉的話題,考查大學(xué)生省的學(xué)習(xí)以及生活,現(xiàn)象類作文,而且文體也很清晰,就是一篇傳統(tǒng)的議論文,考查形式和內(nèi)容都類似于2016年12月的真題,總體難度中等。
【試題解析】
具體解析如下:
文章分三段式論述,第一段引出話題,簡明扼要的指出背景,第二段分析問題,這里也就是說明挑戰(zhàn)的具體內(nèi)容,第三段提出應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)的措施。
范文:
The current days have witnessed the phenomenon that a mounting number of college students are showing great enthusiasm for starting a career after graduation. Despite the seemingly promising prospect in the pursuit of earning money and realizing the value of life, they may also face a variety of challenges.
First and foremost, most students are unwilling to do fundamental jobs because they think fundamental jobs can neither bring them money nor give them benefit. Besides, some companies are too strict to students. They claim that students without practical experience are not suitable for their position. What’s more, China is a country with a large number of population, which leads to stiff competition among students.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, graduates should improve their capacity as well adjust their vision to find new chances in the job market. Dreadful as the challenges are, it is deeply-rooted in my mind that as long as graduates can arm themselves with power and determination, the ideal jobs are awaiting them.
本文以卷三the challenges of starting a career after graduation為例,第一段介紹了在當(dāng)今社會越來越多的學(xué)生選擇畢業(yè)之后工作,然而他們也面臨著一些挑戰(zhàn),第二段從三個(gè)方面分析挑戰(zhàn)的內(nèi)容,一方面是學(xué)生自己的問題,第二個(gè)是用人單位要求嚴(yán)格,以及第三個(gè)形勢嚴(yán)峻,最后第三段指出在面臨這些挑戰(zhàn)時(shí),學(xué)生應(yīng)如何應(yīng)對,是一篇典型的問題解決型文章的寫法,中規(guī)中矩就基本完美了。
基本結(jié)構(gòu)確立后,就是語言的雕琢,首先是一些高頻詞的替換,例如bad, future等。其次是句型結(jié)構(gòu)的多變,熟練的詞性轉(zhuǎn)換、適當(dāng)?shù)牡寡b從句的靈活運(yùn)用,都可以使得句式變化多樣,而且長短句結(jié)合,也使文章看起來豐富多彩,更加具有層次性。最后是句與句、段與段之間的關(guān)聯(lián),關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過渡句都是必不可少的,連接詞使觀點(diǎn)清晰,過渡句也起到了每段的主題句的作用,使文章更加富有層次感。
借此機(jī)會,再次提醒各位同學(xué),盡管近幾年大學(xué)英語四級寫作專項(xiàng)看起來變化莫測,但萬變不離其宗,大家要學(xué)會透過現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì),確立文章結(jié)構(gòu),把握好大方向,同時(shí)夯實(shí)詞句段基本功的訓(xùn)練,以不變應(yīng)萬變,決勝四級寫作。
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