新概念3冊對于六級寫作的啟發—句式的多樣性
句式的多樣性
僅僅只注意了邏輯層面的文章還是不夠的,要想拿到12分以上的高分,我們必須在語言的多樣性和句式的變換上下功夫。新概念三同樣為我們提供了很多模仿性極強的經典句式。
1 文章開頭運用同位語對所論述的核心名詞進行解釋
Mr. Taylor, the owner of a jewellery shop,was admiring a new window display. (Lesson6)
如果要寫一篇關于環境污染的文章,我們可以這樣開頭
Environmental pollution, a phenomenon which lasted a number of years, has grown more and more serious。
2 以副詞開頭的句子
平時寫文章我們習慣于副詞緊靠所修飾的動詞,殊不知靈活運用副詞可以使文章的表達增色不少。
Inevitably you arrive at your destination almost exhausted. (Lesson 44)
在一篇關于能源問題的文章中,我們可以運用以副詞開頭的句子。
Eventually our natural resources, however abundant, will run out。
3 以介詞短語開頭的句子
In democratic countries any efforts to restrict the freedom of the press are rightly condemned. (Lesson 45)
在論文中,我們通常會寫“不同的人對于所議論的這個問題有著不同的看法”這句話:
In discussing this problem, different people have different opinions。
4 當句子的主語、賓語過長時,我們可以使用it充當形式主語、形式賓語,從而平衡句子結構。
It is disturbing to think that a dangerous wild animal is still at large in the quiet countryside. (Lesson 1) (it充當形式主語)
當我們要批駁一個錯誤觀點時,我們可以這樣表達
It is hard to believe that some people should have such a stupid idea。
Radio and television have made it possible for advertisers to capture the attention of millions of people in this way. (Lesson 26) (it充當形式賓語)
以“Getting to know the world outside the campus”為題目的作文中,我們可以這樣開頭
With the development of our society, the campus is no longer an “ivory tower” and students find it hard to confine themselves to the campus。
5 獨立主格結構用在描述型的文章中可以使表達更生動。
The silence was suddenly broken when a large car, with its headlights on and its horn blaring, roared down the arcade. (Lesson 6)
要描述一個月黑風高的夜晚,我們可以這樣寫
With the breeze becoming stronger and the moonlight giving the lake a sinister appearance, the night grew more dangerous。
6 分詞的運用令文章行文簡潔,明快。
Not wanting to frighten the poor man, Mrs. Richards quickly hid in the small storeroom under the stairs. (Lesson 13)(現在分詞作狀語表示原因)
在“How I Finance My College Education”中可以這樣寫
Not wanting to seek help from the loan programs, I decided to offer instruction as a tutor。
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