2018年12月英語六級寫作真題第一套解析
【整體解析】
2018年12月六級作文圍繞日常生活工作展開，出題思路中規中矩，出題方式以”How to balance” “如何平衡關系”命題，內容涉及學習與課外活動、工作職責與個人興趣、工作與休閑，話題并不陌生，也在?？荚掝}之類，涉及詞匯、句法、表達也是考生比較熟悉的，屬于大學生生活話題，學生有話可說，寫起來并不難，根據平時積累與生活中一般性的所感所思即可鋪展成篇。需要注意的是，此類標題需要考生提出具體的方式方法措施，故在具體展開時，切莫圍繞個人主觀觀點反復強調，或寫成對兩者關系的探討，只要給出具體的做法即可。
【試題解析】
下面以How to Balance work and study 為例：
Nowadays, the fast-paced society calls for students’ development in an all-round way. Learning ability and practical skills play an equally important role in success. Therefore, for students, how to strike a balance between academic study and extra curriculum activities is of great importance.
Personally speaking, the following are advisable ways. First and foremost, learning efficiency should be improved in order to spare more time in taking activities. To ease students’ pressure from study for a whole day, a more effective learning method should be taken, such as turning to abstracts or team discussion for help. In addition, the pre-arrangement of activities is necessary in accordance with school schedule. If students can make an early plan about the activities in detail, for instance, time, place and facilities, they will make full use of the valuable leisure time. Last but not least, it is necessary to take the most suitable activities. Personalities, interests and strengths are factors to be considered. It will be better if the activity can exert positive influence on academic study.
All in all, if students can improve the learning efficiency, make preparations in advance and choose the suitable activity, they will enjoy the fun while acquiring academic achievement.
解析
首段，引入：通過現代社會追求全面發展引入關鍵詞：學習與實踐，這兩者對于成功皆為重要因素。之后，鎖定學生群體，提出如何保持兩者平衡，進而進出話題，起到承上啟下的作用。
第二段，主題展開：圍繞問題，列明三點措施。從學習效率、預先安排、合理挑選著手闡釋。三個分論點句型統一采用簡單句陳述(尤其使用了被動句)，展開部分結合了簡單句與狀語從句，彰顯論述的層次。詞匯與表達方面，使用spare time, turn to, pre-arrangement, in accordance with, exert positive influence等詞組，簡明扼要。
末段，采用狀語從句總結措施，同時強調了保持學習與課外活動之間平衡的重要性。
本文圍繞在校學生的學習與課外活動開展，可從自身體會出發，從時間分配、活動內容角度思考措施，即，一方面“擠”出學習時間參加活動，一方面要合理安排活動，使得兩者相輔相成，互相促進。在話題引入方面，采用平時訓練的5種方式中的由社會現狀引入的方式，鎖定關鍵詞，確保不偏題，之后直入主題，提出本文要解決的問題。
學生在練習與備考作文時，仍應以“完整”(篇章完整，分三段)、“切題”(首段背景介紹后直入主題，亮出話題)、“準確”(語法、詞匯不出錯)三個方面為原則，規規矩矩寫作。
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