At a street corner squats a beggar. He is always there, under the tree, in the shade. Senile as he is, he crouches in some ragged pieces of cloth. He is there, always there, like a sculpture in the street. Day after day, thousands of people pass in front of him hurriedly. Some spare coins, most give a quick glance in disgust. However, it shocks me very much. What a miserable life a human being can bear!

　　At the first sight, you will be appalled that God has created such an emaciated creature. His dark face is full of wrinkles, deep or shallow. They remind people of the hardship the beggar has experienced. His cheeks are bony while his neck is so thin. His hair is bedraggled like a nest, a nest with a coat of oil. What an impressive sculpture it is! Most of the time, his mouth speaks while his eyes are half closed. But once a pedes trian passes by, he will keep nodding his head slightly and auto matically as if a gust of wind had forced him to do so. At the same time, he raises his gnarled right hand from the ground,murmuring to beg. What a hand! It is a seamy, shriveled hand. The wrinkles in his skin are stretching, twisting and in tersecting. Dirt fills the grooves. In front of him lies an dilapidated bowl with only a few coins in it. Believe it or not, it is more and more difficult to make a living by begging. Beside him, there is a stick as slim as his legs as if the third leg of the poor old beggar.

　　The sun is shining in the sky, but it doesn't shine every corner of the world. There are still people who are not bathed in the sunshine. The beggar is just one of them.

一個乞丐蹲在街角。他總是在那里，在樹下，在樹蔭下。老年的他，他蹲在一些衣衫襤褸的布片。他在那里，總是在那里，像一個雕塑在街上。一天又一天，成千上萬的人匆匆地從他面前經過。一些備用的硬幣，最能快速瀏覽厭惡。然而，它沖擊了我很多。人能承受的痛苦！

乍一看，你會感到震驚的是上帝創造了這樣一個瘦弱的動物。他黝黑的臉上布滿了皺紋，深或淺。他們提醒人們，這個乞丐所經歷的苦難。他的脖子很瘦，他的臉都是骨的。他的頭發濕漉漉的像一個鳥巢，一個鳥巢一層油。這是一個令人印象深刻的雕塑！大部分的時間，他的嘴說話，而他的眼睛是半封閉的。但一旦足火車經過，他將頭微微自動就像一陣風迫使他不得不這么做。同時，他提出了他粗糙的右手從地上，低聲懇求。一只手！這是一個陰暗，干癟的手。他的皮膚皺紋伸展，扭轉和區。污物填槽。在他面前躺著一個破舊的碗，只有幾個硬幣在它。信不信由你，它越來越難靠乞討為生。在他身邊，有一根棍子像他腿一樣纖細，好像第三條腿的可憐的老乞丐。

太陽在天空中閃閃發光，但它不在世界的每一個角落發光。仍有人在陽光下沐浴。乞丐只是其中的一個。

　　簡 評

　　本文用生動的語言形象地刻畫了一位在路邊以乞討為生的孤苦老人。作者非常注重細節的描寫，如乞討者布滿皺紋、飽經風霜的臉，亂蓬蓬油膩的頭發，半張半合的眼睛，粗糙的手，瘦弱的腿和脖子，他面前的破碗，破爛的衣服等。還包括乞討者的動作，如向行人點頭，伸手乞討等。此外，作者還描述了行人厭惡的神色，進一步渲染了乞討者艱難的處境，以喚起讀者的共鳴。

　　美中不足的是作者對乞討者的描寫沒有遵循一定的順序。描寫文的寫作一般要按一定的空間順序組織，如：從上到下、從里到外、從遠到近等，使文章顯得更有條理。此外，在描寫人物時，要抓住其最主要的特征，避免面面俱到。

　　本文在語言表達上的一大特色是詞匯豐富而準確。如bony(cheeks)，thin(neck)，bedraggled(hair)，gnarled(hand)，stretching，twisting，intersecting(wrinkles)，dilapidated(bowl)等。作者還恰如其分地運用了一些修辭手法，特別是比喻，如His hair is bedraggled like a nest，a nest with a coat Of oil;there is a stick as slim as his legs;he will keep nodding his head slightly and auto matically as if a gust of wind had forced it to do so.

　　

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