高考英語優秀作文賞析:真題滿分作文
假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
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