高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年浙江卷2
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. Thats why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, its really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名師點評：
本文寫作十分成功。語言和句式是本文最大的特點。詞匯中好詞的使用，將作者的意思表達得完整而準確，從而映襯了詞匯的重要性；其次，本文的句式以復雜句為主，表語、定語和狀語從句的使用都十分到位。
積累卡片：好詞：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解釋3. make progress 取得進步
好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. 我對英語學習和外國文化有著濃厚的興趣，因此我想沉浸在英語的學習氛圍中，使得我能更快地進步。 好處：be immersed in 沉浸其中；so that 表示目的。2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.因此，我的觀點是，用英文教授同時對于一些難以理解的內容用中文進行輔助講解。好處：表語從句使用正確。
高考英語優秀作文賞析：真題滿分作文
假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．詞數：100左右：2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由：
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。
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