高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年重慶卷1
Dear Amy,
Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
名師點評：
本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。
積累卡片：好詞：1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈
好句：1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。 好處：which引導限制性定語從句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease! 因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧！ 好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。
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