高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年天津卷2
How to Protect Our Eyesight
Look at the picture and you will find the worrying phenomenon: most students now wear glasses. Because of unhealthy ways of using eyes and high study pressure, students get shortsighted easily.
However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting shortsighted. When reading, make sure you are in the bright place and let your eyes rest every hour. If your eyes are aching,doing some eye exercises can relieve your eye tiredness. It will be good to your eyes to take enough sleep. I believe you can protect your eyes if you follow the tips.
Hope every one of you have a clear world!
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本文審題準確，要點完整而齊全。從結構來說，首先提出問題，其次討論如何及為什么需要解決問題。文章長短句結合使用，句式變換而流暢。文章用詞地道而成熟，可以稱得上是一篇不錯的考場佳作。
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好詞：1. ache v. 疼痛2. pressure n. 壓力3. relieve v.緩解
好句：1. However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting shortsighted. 然而我們可以采取一些措施來保護我們的眼睛免于近視。好處：do something to，采取措施。
2. If your eyes are aching, doing some eye exercise can relieve your eye tiredness. 如果你的眼睛感到疼痛，做眼操可以緩解你的視力疲勞。好處：動名詞作主語引導從句。
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