高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年北京卷情景作文2
滿分作文2：
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, our class held the monitor election. The two candidates gave their speeches first and after that other students put the paper with the name of the ideal monitor into a box. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. At last the result was: Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. In that sense, Wang Hong won the election.
I’d like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.Hope to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
名師點評：
本文敘事平穩，內容完整。詞語使用平實，語法運用恰到好處，以準確的表達拿到比較高的分數。本文按圖敘事，用first, after that, at last連接，結構分明。長短句綜合運用，句式富于變化。
積累卡片：
好詞：1. calculation n.計算2.candidate n.候選人
好句：1. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. 老師將其他同學選出的名字加以匯總。
好處：voted，動詞的過去分詞作狀語。
2. Id like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.
我想知道你們班班長競選是如何進行的。
好處：how引導的從句做賓語。
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