高考英語優(yōu)秀作文賞析：2008年北京卷情景作文2
滿分作文2：
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, our class held the monitor election. The two candidates gave their speeches first and after that other students put the paper with the name of the ideal monitor into a box. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. At last the result was: Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. In that sense, Wang Hong won the election.
I’d like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.Hope to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：
本文敘事平穩(wěn)，內(nèi)容完整。詞語使用平實(shí)，語法運(yùn)用恰到好處，以準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)拿到比較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本文按圖敘事，用first, after that, at last連接，結(jié)構(gòu)分明。長(zhǎng)短句綜合運(yùn)用，句式富于變化。
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好詞：1. calculation n.計(jì)算2.candidate n.候選人
好句：1. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. 老師將其他同學(xué)選出的名字加以匯總。
好處：voted，動(dòng)詞的過去分詞作狀語。
2. Id like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.
我想知道你們班班長(zhǎng)競(jìng)選是如何進(jìn)行的。
好處：how引導(dǎo)的從句做賓語。
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