高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年北京卷情景作文1
滿分范文1：
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. So Wang Hong became our monitor. It was an interesting election, isn’t it? Hope to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
名師點評：
本文敘述內容完整而翔實。最突出的優點就是結構分明。作者通過使用了first，then，finally等表示順序的詞語，使文章層次感顯得很強。其次，詞語句式方面，作者也以簡單句為主，增加了一份簡練，流暢而自然。
積累卡片：
好詞：1.respectively ad.各自地2.vote v. 選舉3.election n. 選舉 4. fierce a.激烈的
好句:1. Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. 上周一，我們班舉行了一次班長選舉，兩個候選人競爭激烈。
好處：句式的使用很有特點。
2. Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. 王紅得到了28票，而劉東得到了15票。
好處：while的使用很地道，表示并列情形。
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