雅思寫作技巧：雅思寫作成文篇――借力打力，善用標準
其實，讓雅思考生最頭疼的一件事是，不管自己聽了多少課讀了多少本書，雅思寫作提高就像蝸牛攀墻一樣慢。這對于基礎較好的學生尤其如此。很多考生反映，到了一個瓶頸以后，似乎很難再往上提高。為什么會出現這種情況？這是因為寫作是很難自查的，即使平時自己練了很多，還是不知道自己的錯誤在哪里。自己準備雅思的考生是基本上沒有機會讓專業的寫作老師批改的，而參加大班的考生能夠批改的機會也不多，因此在一對一課堂里，考生有了更多的機會讓老師幫助自己從這四大評分標準的角度精確修改文章。但同時，我在課堂上也會強調要考生自己了解這個標準，做到心中有數。即便課程結束了，自己依然可以用四大評分標準對自己的文章進行修改。四大評分標準本是雅思官方設來評判考生文章的手段，即是對方的"力"，雖然來勢洶洶，但只要我們只要把評分標準當做制勝關鍵，運用每一項評分標準來檢查自己習作，進而得到提高與進步，借力打力，便可在大作文上取得完勝。
四大評分標準分別是:對寫作任務的回應情況;連貫與銜接;詞匯資源語法的多樣性和準確性。毋庸置疑考生的文章在每一方面都要做到盡善盡美才有可能拿高分。出于這個原因，雅思寫作指導書都會從這次個方面入手，教學生如何達到標準。誠然，這些方法的教授對考生來說是有必要的，但雅思寫作的難處在于，"掌握方法"和"運用方法"是完全不同的兩回事。
基于上述原因，本文詳細解讀如何用四大評分標準去衡量和修改一篇學生習作。下表是各項評分標準的自查項目，學生平時練習寫作后可運用此表進行自查，進而完善與提高，做到"借力打力"。
對寫作任務的回應情況
連貫與銜接詞匯資源語法多樣性和準確性文章首段是否是題目的改寫文章每一段是否至少有一個銜接詞（如because, therefore, moreover）文章中同一個詞是否出現了多次時態是否正確文章正文段與末尾段是否與首段提出的觀點一致銜接詞是否使用正確（注意查用法和詞義）詞性是否正確（如“經濟在發展”一句中經濟應用economy這一名詞而不是economic這一形容詞）標點是否正確（兩個完整句之間若沒有連詞中間一定是句號）文章正文段討論的是否是題目的觀點正文段之間是否有銜接手段。文中是否有過多口語詞匯（very, gonna, many可以分別改為extremely, will, a vast number/amount of）單數可數名詞是否裸用（employer不可單獨出現，必須是the/an employer或者是變為復數employers）下文是學生的一片習作，希望考生看完修改過程，今后自己也能用相同方法修改自己的文章。
題目：Electronic dictionaries are increasingly popular among students, especially those majoring in a second language or taking foreign language courses. In your opinion, do the advantages of electronic dictionaries outweigh the disadvantages, or vice versa?
文章：
As the rapid(迅速的) development of science and technology, we have seen the appearance (出現) of lots of new products(產品). They have benefited us in more than one way. Because most of them are advanced(高級的), though they have their disadvantages, but their advantages still outweigh the disadvantages.
The advantages of electronic dictionaries are many. First, they are very light, but they have more than one million words. A paper dictionary with so many words would be very large and heavy. Electronic dictionaries are also easier to use than paper dictionaries. Electronic dictionaries enable users to find a word in a few seconds by typing in(輸入) the word. And they offer a long list of features(特點、功能) that made them better than paper dictionaries, common features consist a calendar, calculator, alarm clock and memos.
The price of electronic dictionaries is no longer a problem. Nowadays, because the number of electronic dictionaries is increasing quickly, the price is not as dear as before. Students can spend a little money to buy a useful electronic dictionary, which is helpful to their study of foreign languages.
As tens of millions of electronic dictionary uses would agree, the disadvantages of these devices are offset (抵消) by their numerous advantages. Students and others will have even more reason to put an electronic dictionary on their shopping list.
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