2016年雅思寫作必備范文精編：學(xué)習(xí)比較

　　【教育類】

　　Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think

　　we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

　　如今，多數(shù)人在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是，有人以為我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)更多的職業(yè)技藝，能否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題)

　　【標(biāo)題解析】本題為經(jīng)典教育話題改寫：能夠了解為職業(yè)教育比照綜合教育，或者專才教育比照通才教育。

　　【相關(guān)話題】

　　【教育類】

　　In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education

　　across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of

　　subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world.

　　在一些國度，中學(xué)生會學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程，在一些國度，學(xué)生們會學(xué)習(xí)一些和將來擇業(yè)相關(guān)的課程，哪一種教育方式愈加適宜?

　　【謀篇規(guī)劃】(退讓反駁)

　　首段：背景引見+爭議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場

　　二段：退讓原題觀念的合理性

　　三段：反駁原題觀念的不合理

　　尾段：再次亮明觀念+總結(jié)理由

　　【思緒拓展】

　　【職業(yè)教育的利好】

　　1. 人們的精神和時間有限，普遍涉獵，難免走馬觀花。相反，集中精神學(xué)習(xí)一門課技藝，可使人成為一個范疇的專家。

　　人生的斗爭的過程就是追求稀缺的過程，你要成為那個不可替代者。

　　2. 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培育的學(xué)生， 擇業(yè)更有競爭力，由于他們能夠合適特殊企業(yè)的需求。

　　【大學(xué)教育的利好】

　　1. 通才教育協(xié)助人完成全面開展，培育多元的興味和才氣，能夠使受教育者順應(yīng)將來不同范疇的工作，因而，能夠減少單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。

　　2.

　　職業(yè)教育通常傳授的是以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的學(xué)問，和就業(yè)相關(guān)聯(lián)的技藝，僅是一種生存技藝的培育，相反，通才教育不只是傳授學(xué)問，還觸及到人的道德教育、性格培育、心靈生長，因而，專才教育更能表現(xiàn)圓滿教育的真理。

　　【范文賞析】

　　【首段】背景引見 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場

　　Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education,

　　many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ

　　greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my

　　opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.

　　【二段】 學(xué)習(xí)職業(yè)技藝的利好

　　Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never

　　without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners

　　secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be

　　greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job

　　candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they

　　have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is

　　master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of

　　subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd

　　considering that one’s time and energy is limited

　　【三段】承受大學(xué)教育的利好：

　　What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense

　　value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who

　　receive university education have plenty of room for career development because

　　they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping

　　one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall

　　development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of

　　colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can

　　train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into

　　the further development of a nation.

　　【尾段】亮明立場

　　Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training

　　schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it

　　helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal

　　talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.

　　【全文點(diǎn)評】

　　本篇主題明白、行文順暢、邏輯明晰、文風(fēng)樸素、偶以亮點(diǎn)詞匯裝點(diǎn)，可為考生賞析之佳作。小鵬哥原創(chuàng)范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無定法，倡議童鞋打造屬于本人的個性范文。2016年雅思有可能開端機(jī)考，很多童鞋報(bào)考學(xué)校的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)也有請求進(jìn)步的趨向，唯有增強(qiáng)練筆，考試才干才高自現(xiàn)。

　　【經(jīng)典語料】

　　1. generalist n通才

　　2. specialist n專才

　　3. specialized education n專才教育

　　4. comprehensive education n通才教育

　　5. vocational training school n 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校

　　6. higher education = high education n 高等教育

　　7. acquire a range of subjects v 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程

　　8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游學(xué)問的海洋

　　9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 防止?jié)撛诘氖I(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)

　　10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身

　　11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為將來事業(yè)的應(yīng)戰(zhàn)做好充沛準(zhǔn)備

　　12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in

　　different fields in the future 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程能夠協(xié)助一個人為將來不同范疇的工作做好準(zhǔn)備

　　13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到面子的有出路的工作

　　14. excel in one specific field v 通曉于一個特殊的范疇

　　15. realize his or her all-round development. v完成全面的開展

　　16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career

　　choice v面對單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)

　　17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 愈加可行和理性

　　18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v

　　進(jìn)步將來擇業(yè)的競爭力

　　19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 樣樣通曉，就是一無所精。

　　20. inject new life into the further development of a nation

　　v給一個國度的開展注入新穎生機(jī)

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